Do YOU agree with our message?

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Recently featured on BBC Introducing and BBC Radio 6

https://soundcloud.com/greencloud-1/w-a

A reggae influenced beat, were at war with everything

Would love to know peoples views

GreenCloud

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  • shackfanshackfan Posts: 15,461
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    I NEVER click on first post links, so tell us here what your message is.
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 3
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    How we are at war with nature, society, terrorists and drugs. Yes all in one song :o
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 3
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    Any feedback guys would be great! Tell me what YOU think
  • ElectraElectra Posts: 55,660
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    Any feedback guys would be great! Tell me what YOU think

    Ok then. I lasted a minute.

    Why?

    The music's nice but the lyrics are trite & the delivery is poor. It sounds like he's reading them off a card & in a hurry to be somewhere else. If you want to deliver a message then the vocal has to carry a lot more conviction & it does help if the message hasn't already been delivered a million times before over several decades.

    Sorry. You did ask :)
  • InkblotInkblot Posts: 26,889
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    Any feedback guys would be great! Tell me what YOU think

    I could listen to your words cos you're a great debater
    But instead I'll put the telly on and eat a baked potat-er.
  • madiain28madiain28 Posts: 1,027
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    Music is good but as already said delivery of message is poor. To the point it's just boring and ruined the backing track.
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