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Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 4)

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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    sandydune wrote: »
    There was a fellow called Percy
    who loved to shout arrivederci!
    :D:D:D
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Menoetius wrote: »
    Asked the curious hare to the rabbit,
    How depraved is the hole you inhabit?
    A superb limerick Meno :D :kitty: :D
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Till next time my friends :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Circus

    The Ringmaster entered and sensed something wrong,
    The Big tent lacked people and sound,

    The juggler let plates spin and wobble so long
    They shattered to bits on the ground.

    The fearless cat tamer who lashed the whip straight
    Now dreaded each tiger and lion,

    The strong man attempted to pick up the weight
    Yet couldn't lift one ounce of iron.

    The old fortune teller's predictions were marred
    When her mind lost all psychic force,

    The girl who rode side-saddle pulled the reins hard
    But failed to control the white horse.

    The boy on the trapeze fell without a net,
    The Ringmaster looked at the clown

    Whose shiny red mouth made a terrible threat;
    The ghost circus had come to town.


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    MRSgotobedMRSgotobed Posts: 3,851
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    How brilliantly atmospheric and creepy-very spooky.
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    sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Circus



    Interesting poem, Musty:D

    The circus isn't always serious, I saw a funny circus, there was a banana joke, bananas are amazing, so versatile. :D
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    sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Seagulls on a beach

    Seagulls on a beach
    how they hover
    how they move
    looking for chips
    looking for food
    where's the fish?
    that once was there
    how can that be honestly fair?
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    belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Seagulls on a beach

    Seagulls on a beach
    how they hover
    how they move
    looking for chips
    looking for food
    where's the fish?
    that once was there
    how can that be honestly fair?


    Whitby seagulls are assassins and are the size of little pigs :o
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    sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Are they the starey seagulls? I've seen a few of them, I've noticed that they do that intense starey look .:o They got the look and not the look of love, more the look of, flipping heck :D
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    belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    I've imagined that this mound was built as a look out. The people cleared an area of woodland and built this so they could stand on the top and look out above the dense forest that would have been all around at that time . That's my guess anyway :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    MRSgotobed wrote: »
    How brilliantly atmospheric and creepy-very spooky.
    Ta MrsGoto :)
    sandydune wrote: »
    I saw a funny circus, there was a banana joke, bananas are amazing, so versatile. :D
    I wrote a poem called I, Banana - I might post it next time Sandy :D
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Seagulls on a beach
    how they hover
    I love seagulls - I enjoyed this Sandy :kitty:
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    I've imagined that this mound was built as a look out.
    It's a good a guess as any BB. Personally, I favour the view of Michael Dames, who thinks Silbury represents a pregnant woman. The rest of her body is seen in the surrounding ditch; the thighs and breasts are clearly visible from above. The ancients thought on a monumental scale - the sheer amount of rock-hard chalk dug out to build Silbury Hill is staggering :o
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Cat Dreams

    The cat's on her favourite chair keeping
    As snug as a cat can be
    But while she is peacefully sleeping
    What images does she see?

    Is she in the corn near a farmhouse,
    Crouched down with an icy stare
    That's fixed on a hapless dormouse
    Who's unaware she's even there?

    Or is she beneath a grand ceiling,
    Relaxing on cushions of silk,
    Where dinners are always appealing
    And saucers of gold contain milk?

    Perhaps she is making a bee-line
    For moggies who scrap in the night
    Or singing to some other feline
    Beneath the moon's silvery light.

    The cat wakes and with the dream finished
    No eyes are the equal of these;
    They seem, now that sleep has diminished
    As deep as uncharted seas.


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    ElyanElyan Posts: 8,781
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    “Form square” is the order cried
    As cavalry appear
    The stinking rot of horses hide
    Is drawing ever near

    “Reload” is the order cried
    As horsemen start to trot
    No saviour here to pray abide
    Just powder, gun and shot

    “Fix bayonets” is the order cried
    As horses start to run
    Thundering hooves cast ground aside
    As sabres catch the sun

    “FIRE” is the order cried
    As teeth and eyes flash by
    Crackling smoke from ranks inside
    The square’s loud battle cry

    “Close up” is the order cried
    “Reload” follows fast
    “Aim low – FIRE” as horses slide
    And scream as muskets blast

    “KILL THEM” is the order cried
    As horsemen start to fall
    “KILL THEM” as the square divides
    To batter, stab and brawl
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    IzzySIzzyS Posts: 11,045
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    Take my hand child,
    as an adult,
    I must hold,
    I must sever,
    with love and assurance,
    for my future,
    I must let you go.

    The baggage is simply too much,
    to carry around forevermore,
    but you will not die,
    you will only become
    a better me.

    As I look within, at myself,
    the mirrored reality,
    I wonder what I truly see?
    child or grown up?
    fear, nerves,
    hate and anger,
    happiness and laughter,
    the haunting question mark
    looms...

    A tightrope of uncertainties,
    can be detected,
    just as fear may be smelt in the air,
    grasped in the shaking fist,
    delicate, risks everywhere.

    To take or not to take?
    the options are non-existent,
    for to live is to carry on,
    risk is inevitable -
    lets hope it pays off.

    As I think; deeper,
    look closer,
    what is it that comes foremost to mind,
    that I see, in my minds eye?.

    I must not lie,
    the voice calls out,
    for there is no worse self infliction you can apply,
    so I bare that in mind, as I question,
    what I see,
    unaware of the opinions of others;
    of you, of me.
    I realise,
    if I were to lie, I'd only be fooling myself.

    There is no escape,
    from a life time sentence
    of denial,
    when you know what it is your denying.

    Always there will be,
    a part of you
    knowing and working,
    to keep it all within.

    I'm not sure if that piece entirely makes much sense, its just more of the same really but maybe it'll strike a chord with someone? who knows. I like to think it sounds somewhat poetic(?) perhaps. I hope to try and write something more 'jolly' shortly (though I've probably jinxed myself by saying so(!)).
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    belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    It's a good a guess as any BB. Personally, I favour the view of Michael Dames, who thinks Silbury represents a pregnant woman. The rest of her body is seen in the surrounding ditch; the thighs and breasts are clearly visible from above. The ancients thought on a monumental scale - the sheer amount of rock-hard chalk dug out to build Silbury Hill is staggering :o

    When I googled about a bit, I came across some mounds that had been built in North America about the same time . Evidently there is a collective name for the people who created them. Guess what it is .... Mound Builders ! :D
    https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mound_Builders

    I'm going to see if we know if there was a lot of water about in that area or if it ever flooded , as it looks like there is lots of connections to rivers in North America .
    I've had a look at the pictures , but I can't see how it looks like a woman :D
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Are they the starey seagulls? I've seen a few of them, I've noticed that they do that intense starey look .:o They got the look and not the look of love, more the look of, flipping heck :D

    Yes they are starey alright !!
    http://fineartamerica.com/images-simple-print/images-medium/the-disapproving-seagull-lori-beesley.jpg

    :D
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    sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    I wrote a poem called I, Banana - I might post it next time Sandy :D

    Bananas are lovely with custard.:D
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    When I googled about a bit, I came across some mounds that had been built in North America about the same time
    It's mind-blowing to know that two different peoples - in America and Britain - were building similar monuments, unaware of each other :o
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Gifts for Artists

    Lay northern clogs on Lowry's grave,
    His art deserves the honour,
    For Michelangelo who gave
    So much, a stone Madonna,
    For Edgar Allen Poe be brave,
    At night, place belladonna.

    Leave sheets of paper for John Clare
    And petals to inspire,
    A flame for Blake to help repair
    His chariot of fire,
    Love letters for Charles Baudelaire
    That simmer with desire.

    Place absinthe where the sunlight spills
    On Vincent who reposes,
    For Oscar Wilde arrange new quills
    But nothing old of Bosie's,
    For William Wordsworth, daffodils,
    For Holbein, Tudor roses.

    For tombs of artists let us look
    And bring them gifts tomorrow,
    Leave Betjeman a quaint guidebook,
    For Holman Hunt we'll borrow
    A Bible and for Rupert Brooke
    Some poppies picked in sorrow.


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    Elyan wrote: »
    “KILL THEM” as the square divides
    To batter, stab and brawl
    Great poem Elyan, it puts across the mechanical orders and actions of warfare really well. I could almost see the sabres shining on the battlefield :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    IzzyS wrote: »
    I'm not sure if that piece entirely makes much sense
    I know what you mean Izzy but the poem was still very effective. I read it twice :)
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