Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 4)

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  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Sweet Sparrow

    As I place the kernel gently and retreat so out of sight
    A squirrel comes and grabs it, you missed out…serves you right.
    I had to laugh at this BB; it seemed such a nice and gentle tribute to the sparrow - until the end :D

    You've got to get in quick :kitty: A five-star write :D
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Little Robin on a tree
    how you sit so merrily
    Lovely Sandy :) I saw a robin the other day, I reckon his compass was wrong :kitty:
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    The squirrels pinched all my strawberries last year . Mind you they did look cute sitting in the trees nibbling on them :):) xx
    :D:D:D
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    I'm getting hungry and have to leave the library for a bite to eat, so I'll catch up next time. It's brilliant to see the thread so busy - and the return of MRSgotobed :D
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Lovely Sandy :) I saw a robin the other day, I reckon his compass was wrong :kitty:
    Thanks:D

    What made you think that about the robin?:confused:
  • belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    Shakespeare's Bloomers

    Did he sleep in pyjamas
    Or spend nights in the raw?
    We know of Shakespeare's dramas
    But not what togs he wore.


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    Well I've just googled Elizabethan cod pieces to see if I could post a picture to answer your question....don't try it at the library, they will take your ticket off you ! :o
    I'm off out with the 'girls' tonight so I'll ask around and see if they can come up with anything :D

    Thanks for the nice comments as always. Yes some lovely poems posted recently :)
  • archiverarchiver Posts: 13,011
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    I'm getting hungry and have to leave the library for a bite to eat, so I'll catch up next time. It's brilliant to see the thread so busy - and the return of MRSgotobed :D
    How could you leave when surrounded by so much food for thought? :o

    Haven't seen Frank for ages. Seems greedy to always want more from poets, but I do.

    As a rhymist, I was pleased to achieve a couplet with four rhyming syllables of eight recently. I awarded myself an imaginary gold star. :)

    You'll always be the caretaker here Musty, but the place is set up so well it runs along pretty well while you publish and go on the road... Take care.
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    Busy, busy, busy
    must keep finding more to do,
    for as long as I’m distracted,
    I won’t be hearing as much from you.

    By you,
    you mean…who?
    Who else,
    the nagging, self critical voice
    who hides inside us all, invisible to the naked eye
    when we should be comforted and indeed rejoice
    by looking back at the good we’ve done.

    Instead worries, fears, doubts,
    come forth - question/mock/poke fun
    at where we stand.

    How do you successfully move forward,
    take the risk of sticking your neck out,
    the leap of faith surely too large,
    what if I jump but never manage to land?!.

    This voice be the voice of doubt,
    waiting to come out,
    the eternally unsure,
    patient and demure.

    The cautious worry,
    everpresent in the background…
    how I wish I could bury,
    discard, say goodbye for once and for all, to
    those painfully familiar whispers.

    I should be doing something else,
    mustn’t slacken,
    there are always things to be done,
    words to be written,
    wishes and dreams expressed,
    there can be no time left to rest
    keep busy, busy, busy!.

    Whatever it takes I’ll do -
    anything to distract myself, not pay attention
    to the critic, who only sees time slip away.

    Achievements be darned,
    time passes by like sand
    between fingers;
    never to be regained,
    thus make the most of what we have,
    don’t mourn for the mistakes
    but hope for what may come!.

    Motivate, plan and cross your fingers,
    as hope keeps us going,
    while sadness pulls us down, out of view.

    the voice is laced, if you allow your guard down,
    with worries, put-downs, forming the strictest critic possible
    unable to ignore every mistake made,
    self awareness at its worst.

    So to the ending,
    this is where I say, emphatically,
    accept and be at peace, kindly shrug off the voice
    then it loses its power,
    for this is the best
    that can be hoped for.
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    IzzyS wrote: »

    So to the ending,
    this is where I say, emphatically,
    accept and be at peace, kindly shrug off the voice
    then it loses its power,
    for this is the best
    that can be hoped for.

    I hope you achieve that Izzy. Thanks for sharing your words :) x
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    ... And Relax.

    Chill. Take a pill
    If you don't do it
    someone else will.

    Breathe slowly
    Deep and long
    Try to keep your mind strong.

    Think of absolutely nothing
    close your eyes and picture something
    soft like pillows billowing
    or weeping willows willowing.

    Constant stream of conscious bubbles
    coagulating all your troubles
    Turn it off for just a mo.
    and think of no thing you know.

    Hold that empty timeless thought
    empowering moments you bought.
    Suddenly awake refreshed
    with worthless worries all suppressed.
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    archiver wrote: »
    ... And Relax.

    Think of absolutely nothing
    close your eyes and picture something
    soft like pillows billowing
    or weeping willows willowing.

    Beautiful imagery and sentiment. :)
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    Beautiful imagery and sentiment. :)
    Thanks bb. It was an ode to power napping really. Loving your stuff here and not to far away too. ;-)
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    jimmy_reed wrote: »
    I love 'Devil Tale' poetry, here is a good one which could almost be a childrens story if it wasn't so dark
    Thanks for the links Jimmy, I'll be checking those out - welcome to the thread by the way :)
    sandydune wrote: »
    What made you think that about the robin?:confused:
    Because I only usually see them in the winter when it's snowy :D
    I'm off out with the 'girls' tonight so I'll ask around and see if they can come up with anything :D
    Henry VIII had a big one BB :blush::D
    archiver wrote: »
    You'll always be the caretaker here Musty, but the place is set up so well it runs along pretty well while you publish and go on the road... Take care.
    It's going to take me ages to read everything John :o Well done with the gold star :D

    I'm missing Frank too :(
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    The Unicorn

    The sorceress of seasons
    Knew every potion's blend,
    There were a thousand reasons
    Why nature was her friend.

    They said that she could sway corn,
    Make pictures out of smoke
    And turn the smallest acorn
    Into the tallest oak.

    Her eyes were full of sorrow
    Yet every time she smiled
    The gods who mould tomorrow
    Stared down at her, beguiled.

    This woman who exceeded
    At magic in her prime
    Had met the man she needed,
    A conjurer of rhyme.

    One morning with her poet
    As mist hung in the air
    An open field would show it;
    A group of horses there.

    And while the sun was dozing,
    A sleepy light for now,
    One horse seemed more imposing,
    A horn adorned its brow.

    Free of the men who'd blamed it
    And punishments incurred,
    Nobody yet had tamed it,
    The wild one in the herd.

    The sorceress, enchanted
    Towards the creature went,
    The unicorn's head slanted,
    Apparently content.

    She said she was an ally
    And stroked the silver mane,
    Then whispered to it 'Shall I
    Heal your unspoken pain?'

    She mounted it and bareback
    Rode off, the poet gazed
    And when she turned to stare back
    He watched the scene, amazed.

    With neither whip or banter
    She'd tamed the beast with ease,
    It started with a canter
    Then beat the morning breeze.

    A vision he would cherish,
    So ravishing her form,
    Some moments never perish,
    They linger, sweet and warm.

    The couple who passed that way
    Left blessings in its mind;
    The unicorn from that day
    Knew humans could be kind.


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    The Unicorn

    Knew humans could be kind.


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    How lovely. Thank you so much for finding that. I know you are busy with other poetry , but it was worth your efforts for me and all the people who will read it :)
  • belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    Imagination

    If you really try you might just see that flickering speck of light
    May be enough to guide the way in the blackness of your night.
    Be not concerned about its source or how long to be sustained
    For many never see this bright and avert their eyes ashamed.

    It dances as a life unplanned , the wind can change its power
    And as you watch its burning rhythm, stand tall don’t ever cower.
    For when the cold cuts through your thoughts and desolation smothers
    That tiny spark can reignite and spread its warmth to others.

    Remember all must share this flame, it’s not for one to own
    For as we try to tame its glow the light will dim as blown.
    Possession is not possible, as if you try to cage
    Its dance will be restricted and rhythm fall from life’s page.

    So if you start to stumble and can’t see past the wall
    The flicker may be hiding, just look and you won’t fall
    The light is there inside you , imagination unrestricted
    A gift to use to make the world all beauty so depicted.
  • belly buttonbelly button Posts: 17,026
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    All quiet in the poet house…
    Shhhhh don’t stir their dreaming
    I’ll creep back out ,come back again
    When poems and rhymes are teeming :)
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Wonderful Day

    When a gentle breeze comes thy way
    maybe agree laugh with and sway
    to merry enjoyment wonderful day.
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    All quiet in the poet house…
    :D

    If there was really a poet house, how could such be quiet?
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    Because I only usually see them in the winter when it's snowy :D

    Where do robins go in the summertime?:D
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    sandydune wrote: »
    :D

    If there was really a poet house, how could such be quiet?

    I think this one might be as Musty has tittled off, probably to Stonehenge :D and Archiver is 'closed' :(. If you read this John a little wave so we know you are ok would be good :)
    sandydune wrote: »
    Where do robins go in the summertime?:D

    I think their red breasts just fade a bit so they aren't so noticeable...either that or they all go to Bogna for six weeks on a bus trip ;-)
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Wonderful Day

    When a gentle breeze comes thy way
    maybe agree laugh with and sway
    to merry enjoyment wonderful day.

    But when a storm comes through
    and the sky isn't blue
    try not to cry, soon be past, yes it's true.
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    I think this one might be as Musty has tittled off, probably to Stonehenge :D and Archiver is 'closed' :(. If you read this John a little wave so we know you are ok would be good :)



    I think their red breasts just fade a bit so they aren't so noticeable...either that or they all go to Bogna for six weeks on a bus trip ;-)
    :D

    Bognor Regis, they might have gone to play Crazy Golf.:D
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    But when a storm comes through
    and the sky isn't blue
    try not to cry, soon be past, yes it's true.

    Keep love asteady and rock on sweet teddy.:D
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    sandydune wrote: »
    :D

    Bognor Regis, they might have gone to play Crazy Golf.:D

    Would be appropriate :D
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