An idea for a DUFF DUFF moment on EastEnders...

SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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I have recently taken up Script writing I mainly directed before and I have always wanted to write an episode of EastEnders here's a little taster of what I am writing at the moment....


Jack and Sharon are having a heated discussion regarding Phil
Jack - I don't like how you're always around Phil, I mean let's switch positions if I was shacked up with Ronnie 24/7 what would you do?
Sharon - I would get on with my life and not look for things that are not there
Jack - Not there? I see the way he looks at you, the way you're always at his beck and call
Sharon - I've told you before and I'll tell you again Phil is part of my life and always will be. This is your ring on my finger is that not enough?
Jack - No it isn't. I want your time, your commitment for you to understand that I don't like this whole set up with Phil
Sharon - Oh do you know what Jack, If Dennis can cope with Grant & Phil being around, I'm sure you can cope with one and if not then lets call the wedding off

DUFF DUFF

What do you think?

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  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    -Bump-
  • Taz93Taz93 Posts: 13,315
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    That actually sounds realistic. I can see that happening on screen. :)
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 309
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    That is great!!
    Yay!! The end of Shack!! :D
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    Taz93 wrote: »
    That actually sounds realistic. I can see that happening on screen. :)

    Thank you!
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    That is great!!
    Yay!! The end of Shack!! :D

    haha thank you
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    I think I could write a better episode than this!
  • Sorcha_27Sorcha_27 Posts: 138,752
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    SJFerrol wrote: »
    I think I could write a better episode than this!

    Write a scene where Kane Dies of a stroke due to his constant gurning :D
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 4,827
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    Write a scene where Kane Dies of a stroke due to his constant gurning :D

    Who is Kane? The 30 year old wanna be gangster?
  • Sorcha_27Sorcha_27 Posts: 138,752
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    Who is Kane? The 30 year old wanna be gangster?

    Yeah the charmer who made the Gun gesture at the end LOL
  • [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 4,827
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    Yeah the charmer who made the Gun gesture at the end LOL

    Haven't watched EE for a while :o Catch an episode every now and then but I might watch tonight's if he was in.
    He's hilarious :D They all are tbh
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    omg why have only 10 people posted a comment :(
  • valdvald Posts: 46,057
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    SJFerrol wrote: »
    omg why have only 10 people posted a comment :(

    In my case it's a complete lack of interest in Sharon/Jack/ Phil, or indeed any love triangle.

    Now if you come up with one for Dot's court case:( or better still Janine's return :D...............
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    vald wrote: »
    In my case it's a complete lack of interest in Sharon/Jack/ Phil, or indeed any love triangle.

    Now if you come up with one for Dot's court case:( or better still Janine's return :D...............

    What If I wrote a Peggy return?
  • valdvald Posts: 46,057
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    SJFerrol wrote: »
    What If I wrote a Peggy return?

    Loath Peggy :o
  • SJFerrolSJFerrol Posts: 357
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    vald wrote: »
    Loath Peggy :o

    I don't know how to make Janine come back with a bang seems odd that she would leave tbh
  • valdvald Posts: 46,057
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    SJFerrol wrote: »
    I don't know how to make Janine come back with a bang seems odd that she would leave tbh

    Oh well I'll see the real thing in a couple of weeks.:D

    Post natal depression often makes women behave strangely.
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    Derivative.
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