Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 4)

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  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    And I drift through the loosening lace mesh
    into the warm, clear surround of summer.
    Listen and Tomorrow are two more excellent pieces. I particularly liked the end of the latter, quoted above.
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    I won't be back until the second of January or after, so Happy New Year to everyone who posts to or reads the thread :kitty:
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    I nearly missed this one - brilliant, just brilliant! You're on fire Scottie :D
  • scottie2121scottie2121 Posts: 11,284
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    All the best for 2015 Musty.


    And many many thanks for everything you do for this exceptional part of DS.
  • IzzySIzzyS Posts: 11,045
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    A wise, timely and well-writtten message Izzy :)

    Happy New Year to you too :kitty:

    Thank you Mr. Mustard :)
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    And many many thanks for everything you do for this exceptional part of DS.
    Cheers Scottie :)
    IzzyS wrote: »
    Thank you Mr. Mustard :)
    It's Musty Izzy - Mr Mustard is just too formal :D
  • IzzySIzzyS Posts: 11,045
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    Cheers Scottie :)


    It's Musty Izzy - Mr Mustard is just too formal :D

    Oops, Musty it is then :) you chose your username though, not me lol :kitty:
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Happy New Year to everyone who posts to or reads the thread :kitty:

    Happy New Year Musty:D
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    IzzyS wrote:
    I hope everyone is ok and had a good Christmas by the way and a very Happy New Year to all when it comes, of course. :)
    Happy New Year IzzyS:D
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Happy New Year scottie2121, loving your style of poetry:D
  • IzzySIzzyS Posts: 11,045
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Happy New Year IzzyS:D

    Thank you - Happy New Year to you too :) im working on a New Year poem

    ETA:- ok, here it is

    New Year (written 31/12/2014) by IzzyS

    New year -
    new hopes,
    new opportunities,
    new experiences,
    new motivation?.

    New year,
    new fears,
    new mistakes.

    New challenges,
    new possibilities,
    new chances
    to seize the day,
    will you take them?

    This new upcoming year is
    whatever you choose to make it.
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Commotion Locomotion

    Did you see such commotion?
    Quite agree, commotion locomotion
  • archiverarchiver Posts: 13,011
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    LSD.

    A chilly morning. Soon be warm.
    Feeling great. On top form.
    Ice warning on the dash'.
    Ages since my big crash.

    Engine purring perfectly.
    Tyres cold as cold can be.
    Sliding as I pull away.
    I could do this all day.

    Gingerly around turn one.
    Almost sideways. Too much fun.
    Gently Bentley on the throttle.
    Next lap? More bottle.

    The feeling down the first straight.
    Impossible to overstate
    the thrill of driving very fast.
    Machine and I, alone at last.

    Other drivers turning up.
    Practising for the cup.
    All hoping for the win.

    Suddenly I'm in a spin,
    then drifting sideways in fresh snow.
    Could be needing a tow.

    Managing to get a grip.
    Mainly thanks to Limited Slip
    Differential rear wheel drive.
    Happy to be alive.
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    English Treasure

    Queen Boudicca's calibre
    Arthur's sword Excalibur
    Poppies at the Cenotaph
    Gandalf and his magic staff,
    Melancholy verse by Keats
    Triffids on deserted streets
    Dramas known as kitchen sinks
    Sunny singles by the Kinks,
    Dreams that Millais left behind
    Country lanes that tend to wind
    Looming Stonehenge megaliths
    Dover's line of chalky cliffs,
    Betjeman and William Blake
    Bluebird speeding on the lake
    Alfred Hitchcock, Robin Hood
    Roast beef next to Yorkshire pud,
    Pots of tea for pick-me-ups
    Non-league teams in FA Cups
    Cornish bays with little boats
    Kenneth Williams anecdotes,
    Vintage cars that need a push
    Lily Langtry and Kate Bush
    Rambling in the Yorkshire Dales
    Enid Blyton's Noddy tales,
    Fish and chips and shepherd's pies
    Eric Morecambe, Ernie Wise
    Tommy Cooper's scarlet fez
    Whistle Down The Wind and Kes,
    Village taverns, Desperate Dan
    Thomas Paine's The Rights of Man
    Sunshine on the Pennines Way
    Skies of unrelenting grey,
    Alan Bennett, Morrissey
    Weston-super-Mare by sea
    Peter Pan, a bear named Pooh
    And The Long Good Friday too,
    Henry Tudor's lengthy reign
    HG Wells and Michael Caine
    Winston Churchill, Rubber Soul
    English treasure makes me whole.


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  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    IzzyS wrote: »
    New Year
    Your poem echoes how I feel Izzy :)

    'Carpe Diem', to quote Robin Williams in Dead Poets Society :kitty:
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    sandydune wrote: »
    Did you see such commotion?
    Quite agree, commotion locomotion
    I hope you didn't get stuck in the train chaos over the holidays Sandy :o:D
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    archiver wrote: »
    LSD.
    I must admit, I assumed this was a poem about drugs John - but it had a good twist in it :kitty: I liked the 'gently Bentley' rhyme too :D
  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    To a Woman

    No eyes were ever greener,
    Where realms of coral lie
    I see you as Athena
    And tempting Lorelei.

    I'll make the sky a palace
    And you can walk its floors,
    Aurora Borealis:
    The Northern Lights are yours.

    O lady of the moonlight,
    By you my heart is owned
    Where dreams of love are noon-bright
    And whispered names are moaned.


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  • mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Did anyone catch Betjemanland on BBC 4 the other night? It was a marvellous jaunt around the places he loved and some he lived in, presented by AN Wilson. What a fierce campaigner John was for old buildings under the threat of the wrecking ball. He saved many :)
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    Music As Life

    Music I see as one of life's greatest boons,
    Could not imagine it without melodic tunes;
    Listen to some as I write within its sweet,
    Cocoons. Mozart's beautiful replete refrains
    Reverberate in ears, delight for one's brains;
    Stimulates like a baby's mother's heartbeat
    And releases burdensomness of my chains.
    Earlier today I heard of terrorisms in France
    By people with no music or any wish to dance.
    Frank
  • performingmonkperformingmonk Posts: 20,086
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    To a Woman

    No eyes were ever greener,
    Where realms of coral lie
    I see you as Athena
    And tempting Lorelei.

    I'll make the sky a palace
    And you can walk its floors,
    Aurora Borealis:
    The Northern Lights are yours.

    O lady of the moonlight,
    By you my heart is owned
    Where dreams of love are noon-bright
    And whispered names are moaned.


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    Just brilliant, that one. :)
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    I hope you didn't get stuck in the train chaos over the holidays Sandy :o:D
    Hi Musty, travelling was fine, no trains for me but the buses, that's another story, true, this time of year has distractions but there are good distractions also.:D
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Sweetness amongst the stars

    There is sweetness amongst the stars
    glistening softly as then is now
    time and truth said from before
    has been shown with silence
    because you heard a time ago
    as I walk I hear your words
    but they are untruth from you
    until when understand it's worth
    so be sweetness amongst the stars.
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    To a Woman

    No eyes were ever greener,
    Where realms of coral lie
    I see you as Athena
    And tempting Lorelei.

    I'll make the sky a palace
    And you can walk its floors,
    Aurora Borealis:
    The Northern Lights are yours.

    O lady of the moonlight,
    By you my heart is owned
    Where dreams of love are noon-bright
    And whispered names are moaned.


    ©
    Athena, a goddess of many.
  • sandydunesandydune Posts: 10,986
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    Wow

    Wow
    words on words become a problem
    projectio as some would say
    as those who live to fight with peace
    as each and every day
    long ago as was said
    words will never hurt me
    but you seem to bring
    upon them back
    somehow to reassert you
    question why you do as such
    because you know not why
    but you are judged by such response
    as silence then walks on by.
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