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Who did it?? (Waterloo Road RP)

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(This idea is based on what happened to Lucy Beale on Eastenders involving her death!)

Back story: Jack McAllister gets into an argument one night with his mum and storms off, never to be seen again, alive...


"I am 17 mum!!! I'm not a little kid anymore!! It's just a party!" Jack McAllister complained
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    "You've got school tomorrow, Jack!" Olivia said.
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    "So?? It's not like I'm going to drink anything!! I'll be home by 11!"
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    "Jack, I said no!!"
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    "Why are you always doing this??? I've let my friends down too many times in the past. I'm not letting them down today. Don't bother to wait up!!" Jack snapped before he stormed out of the house.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    "Jack!!!!!!"
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    Jack ran away from the house.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    Olivia sighed.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    She was only looking out for Jack.

    Meanwhile, Jack was walking towards the party which was being held at the school house.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    He was excited about actually going.

    (Will continue tomorrow! :))
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    Jack kept walking until he was almost there. Suddenly, he felt someone grab him from behind.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    He didn't know what was happening.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    The mystery person put jack over their shoulder and carried him off as he screamed for help.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    No one heard him though.

    (Really going now! :p)
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    The person carried jack all the way to the woods and then dropped him down on the floor.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    "Who are you???" Jack said scared.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    He never got a reply. The person pulled out a knife and stabbed jack in the stomach.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    Jack screamed in agony and passed out.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    The person stabbed jack a few more times until the teenager stirred to see the person pulling out his intestines. "N..no! P...please!" Jack sobbed
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    The person ignored him.
    "W..who a..are y..you???"
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    "The last person you're ever going to see." The person replied coldly before they raised the knife and plunged it into Jack's right eye.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    Jack passed out again.

    Meanwhile, Olivia was getting worried as it was 11:30 already....
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 59,001
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    Where was Jack?? He said he would be back by 11...

    The person put their knife away and grabbed Jack's legs. They dragged the dying teenager deeper into the woods.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    She decided to go to the schoolhouse where she knew the party was.

    "P..please d..don't k..kill me....." A dying Jack begged. He wanted his mum.
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    The person ignored Jack and simply walked off. Jack only lasted 10 minutes before he went limp, dying of blood loss.

    Olivia got to the school house and went inside. She found Maggie. "Is Jack here??" She asked, not knowing her son had just died.
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    puppylove7puppylove7 Posts: 66,692
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    "I haven't seen him all evening." Maggie said.
    "What??? But he set off to come to this party at 9!!" Olivia said really worried now. Jack's friends came over to Olivia and Maggie to see what was going on.
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