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EE: Write an episode game...

MoJo-GirlMoJo-Girl Posts: 979
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As a bit of fun, see if we can write an episode of EastEnders.

One line each. If you feel the scene has come to an end, end it and start a new one...

I'll start:

CAFE:
Phil sits at a table and Stacey enters.

STACEY: Oi Phil, what do you think you're playing at? How dare you treat me like that.

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    princesstinprincesstin Posts: 2,394
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    MoJo-Girl wrote: »
    As a bit of fun, see if we can write an episode of EastEnders.

    One line each. If you feel the scene has come to an end, end it and start a new one...

    I'll start:

    CAFE:
    Phil sits at a table and Stacey enters.

    STACEY: Oi Phil, what do you think you're playing at? How dare you treat me like that.

    Phil: How many times do I have to tell ya? I didn't nick your pills!
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    MoJo-GirlMoJo-Girl Posts: 979
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    Phil: How many times do I have to tell ya? I didn't nick your pills!

    Stacey: Someone did, and Kat said she saw you sneaking out the kitchen. You either nicked the pills or the money Charlie left out. Which is it?
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 208
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    MoJo-Girl wrote: »
    Stacey: Someone did, and Kat said she saw you sneaking out the kitchen. You either nicked the pills or the money Charlie left out. Which is it?

    Phil: Oh an yer take Kats word for everyfin do ya? 'ow about she took the money for the vic
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    MoJo-GirlMoJo-Girl Posts: 979
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    Phil: Oh an yer take Kats word for everyfin do ya? 'ow about she took the money for the vic

    Stacey: You're lyin'. Don't forget you owe me, Phil. After what me and Bradley did for you, you need to remember to treat me nicely. Give me back my pills and give me back my money...or I might have to tell your secret.
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    jamesisacejamesisace Posts: 1,793
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    Phil: Oh yeah? I dare you! So you go squealing to the police and I tell everyone that YOU killed Archie
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    ArthurJBearArthurJBear Posts: 6,909
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    jamesisace wrote: »
    Phil: Oh yeah? I dare you! So you go squealing to the police and I tell everyone that YOU killed Archie

    Lauren walks in and Stacey sees her.

    Stacey "What you been sayin' you gobby little cow!"
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    unclekevounclekevo Posts: 20,749
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    *Lauren looks nervously*
    SCENE ENDS

    Grace and Mercy's flat:
    *Grace finds a letter addressed to Mercy, opening it she sees it's a letter from a private about her termination at 4pm that day*
    *Mercy walks into the kitchen*
    Grace: Who is the father?
    *Fatboy walks in*
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 1,249
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    Grace: It's him isn't it!
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    JC_GTA2010JC_GTA2010 Posts: 2,226
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    *Mercy worryingly looks on and sweeps her hand through her hair*

    New scene:

    Knock at the door at Dot's house, Dot finishes helping Jim into his chair and answers the door

    Dotty stood at the door


    Dot: Oh I say, Dotty!

    Dotty: Hello Gwandma, I have a surprise for you!

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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 3,997
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    Dot : Oh Dotty, come in out of the cold! *comes in and walks through the hall* Oh, I am so glad to see you, if I knew you were coming I'd av....
    Dotty : Gwandma! I said I have a surprise for you!
    Dot : What is it dear?
    Dotty : I'd rather show you?

    *Back to Phil/Stacey scene*
    Shirley : This isn't the place Phil. Stace, go home. Phil, shut up. Stacey, meet us in the caf in 10 minutes.
    Stacey : Bring the pills, Phil. I mean it. (Exits).
    Lauren : Phil! You said you wouldn't tell!
    Phil : Yeah, and your dad thinks you're still a virgin. If only he saw what we got up to eh.....ho ho...
    Shirley : You can't be serious? Her? That little slapper?
    Lauren : Oi!
    Shirley : Shut up! Shouldn't you be working, we don't wanna keep the boys waiting while they've paid their years membership do we...
    *Lauren tries to slap Shirley*.
    *Shirlry catches her arm.*
    Shirley : Haha, Nice try sweetheart. *Bends her arm* Now get out of my sight before I do something I regret *spits on her*.
    (Lauren dashes out the door).
    *Phil laughs*
    Shirley : And you...
    *Slaps him*.
    Shirley :....that's the last time you treat me like that. I'm not your doormat Phil. That's it, we're over. *Takes the last swig of her drink and leaves*.
    Phil's silent for a few moments, and then shouts :
    Phil : Oi! Tracy! Give us another one will ya?
    Tracy : **** off, I'm on my break!


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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 3,997
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    No-one :D?
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    The Queen VicThe Queen Vic Posts: 5,775
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    NEW SCENE: The Queen Vic

    Ronnie lies motionless at the bottom of the Queen Vic stairs.

    KAT: Is she dead?

    Alfie leans down and checks her pulse.

    KAT: Is she dead, Alfie?!
    ALFIE: I can't find a pulse, Kat.
    KAT: I haven't killed her!
    ALFIE: Kat, just calm down! Please just calm down!
    KAT: She's got a little baby boy, Alfie. She's a Mum!
    ALFIE: Listen, its gonna be alright. We'll gt her an ambulance and she can go back to her boy. Okay?
    KAT: Okay.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 3,997
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    This episode has been ruined :p! We can't randomly have that 20 misn through the episode ;)

    Someone wanna carry on one of the old ones?
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    MoJo-GirlMoJo-Girl Posts: 979
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    Cont other scene...

    The Cafe

    Stacey is sitting at a table, waiting. Shirley enters.

    Shirley: Here.

    (Throws some money on the table)

    Stacey: What's this for?
    Shirley: Work.
    Stacey: What are you going on about?
    Shirley: You got rid of Archie. I want you to get rid of someone else.
    Stacey: I ain't helping you Shirley. Find someone else.
    Shirley: Very well. I'll go straight to the police and tell them about Archie...
    Stacey: Keep yer voice dahn.
    Shirley: (Pointing to the money) There's more where that came from you know. You could make Lilly's life all that yours isn't.
    Stacey: Why can't you go to Phil? I'm sure he's a dab hand at being a hitman.
    Shirley: I can't...this is one thing I can't go to 'im about...
    Stacey: Why not?
    Shirley: Use your nut, Stace. Phil has to be taken care of. Once and for all.

    (She slides the money to Stacey)

    Shirley: Are you in?
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    Tass BTass B Posts: 1,594
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    MoJo-Girl wrote: »
    Cont other scene...

    The Cafe

    Stacey is sitting at a table, waiting. Shirley enters.

    Shirley: Here.

    (Throws some money on the table)

    Stacey: What's this for?
    Shirley: Work.
    Stacey: What are you going on about?
    Shirley: You got rid of Archie. I want you to get rid of someone else.
    Stacey: I ain't helping you Shirley. Find someone else.
    Shirley: Very well. I'll go straight to the police and tell them about Archie...
    Stacey: Keep yer voice dahn.
    Shirley: (Pointing to the money) There's more where that came from you know. You could make Lilly's life all that yours isn't.
    Stacey: Why can't you go to Phil? I'm sure he's a dab hand at being a hitman.
    Shirley: I can't...this is one thing I can't go to 'im about...
    Stacey: Why not?
    Shirley: Use your nut, Stace. Phil has to be taken care of. Once and for all.

    (She slides the money to Stacey)

    Shirley: Are you in?

    Stacey: Depends. If anyone starts asking questions, you've got to back me up!
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