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The Doctor takes Roston and Jasmine back to Manchester 2009 to visit Jasmine's family. However, as the TARDIS lands, its diverted to New Earth in the far future. Arriving there, they discover peace talks between the humans, an old enemy and a new race. A spanner in the works is all its takes to hurtle New Earth to extinction: can the Doctor stop it before its too late??
Now then...
Still need to get some ideas together before we write it ok> visit http://doctorwhostories.webs.com XD. voice your opinion now!
Now then...
Still need to get some ideas together before we write it ok> visit http://doctorwhostories.webs.com XD. voice your opinion now!
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especially if you have a website as well i dont see the need
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The TARDIS console heaved up and around as it landed in Manchester. Roston stared eagerly at the doors, impatient to see previous life. Jasmine put on a thick coat and proceeded towards the doors first.
And then the Cloister Bell sounded.
"Don't go out!" the Doctor yelled, hurling himself ahead. The central pillar heaved up and down, and the interior glowed bright red. Smoke ascended from the grill, and then stopped.
"I don't think we're in Manchester," the Doctor announced, a voice in the darkness. He pressed open the door in shock and walked out into a large circular room.
"Hello? Anybody home?" the Doctor called, his voice bouncing off the walls. A man in a tuxedo strolled towards him from the back and beckoned.
"Are you alright sir?" he asked in a curt voice.
"Yes. I was on my way to Manchester actually and I sort of.. landed here... which is where?"
"Oh you're in New New York sir. The year 345 AHM. After Human Migration to you sir. Yes you're just in time to witness the Conference of New Brooklyn..."
"Ah well yes umm not manchester" the doctor replied running his hand through his hair "infact we're not even on your earth"
"What do you mean my earth?!" Jasmine said increduosly "have we been taken to another dimension or something?"
The doctor looked taken aback at this and pulled a face
"Different dimension..honestly sometimes jasmine i do wonder about you..we're in you're universe i take it thats what you meant, we're just on NEW Earth"
"Yeah... Well after Earth was destroyed the humans moved away to this place. I've been here twice. Met some cat people, and the Macra. Big crabs. BIG," the Doctor replied, staring at his companions.
"What's going on?"
"Who the hell are you?" the man asked.
The door on the other side of the room exploded, and a veil of smoke drifted in amongst the confusion. A dim shape outlined itself from the rest, grabbed someone and left. The smoke cleared to reveal clawmarks scratched down the TARDIS. Jasmine and Roston swam into the Doctor's view.
"Where did that guy go?" Jasmine asked.
"Doctor what are these marks on the TARDIS?" Roston demanded.
"I don't know... but it looked like a Sea Devil...."
The Doctor ran outside, half expecting to see a Sea Devil running down the street. To his surprise, nothing moved on the streets at all. Midnight clung over New Earth, and there was silence everywhere. Cars were left burning in the street, and up ahead the hospital resembed an inferno.
"Ahh the hospital. I was over there. What's happened to it?"
"That would be the Sea Devils," a man whispered from inside his car. He lay there in the wreckage, his voice barely audible against the roar of the flames. "They came many years ago during the drug roar that killed the original founders of New Earth, offering their services. Except it became ugly when we couldn't pay them back,"
"So a war broke out?" Jasmine said, filling in the blanks as she stared at the carnage.
"Devastation. Well, that and the other lot. No one's seen those though: they're lurking around the city," the stranger whispered.
"And you are?" Roston demanded, wishing he had a weapon for comfort
"Orson," he murmered, his body movements still fearing capture.
"Which leaves the New Brooklyn Conference. Come on! We need to go up to see the top people. Take care Orson,"
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never mind. i'll do episode 4 instead
so youve taken the ball and bogged off to another site then?
i think you will find that some people have lives and cant be adding stuff 24hrs a day 365 days a year
you have to learn patience
- criticism from other members of the forum regarding this forum (it clogged up the forum)
-inactive spells where people didn't contribute.
I understand people do have lives, but we wanted to satisfy everyone. By having a website we could broadcast on our own customised site. It's a larger space for us to publish our work.
Everyone is welcome to head to the website and contribute on there, as well as have their say in shaping the site. The stories will be continued, and with the chatbar app writers can discuss their developments to avoid clashes of literature =D so no more deleting cos it's too late!
Apologies again if you feel annoyed, and hopefully you'll join us in writing more episodes =D
BT, DA and the Team
no mate youve satisfied yourselves and no one else,i was all for having somewhere where the stories could go,but moving everything over there for the sake of a few people is silly
Group stories will still carry on but on the website (again, recommended in NEW episode writer). It's an improved medium for us to collectively publish our work.
Again, apologies.
BT, DA and the team
I think youve been very reasonable and sensible about the whole thing. Good on you!
are you still going to do the site?
Doubt it...someone else has done it now so who am I to go and make a better one ? XD