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Excellent Constructed Lyrics with SONG!
timperry26
03-10-2009
Honestly these have to be some of the BEST lyrics ever used in a RAP SONG!

This guy Crooked is AMAZING

LISTEN TO THE SONG HERE: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P3a5x3Lqw-k
PLUS FOLLWING THE LYRICS!
BELOW! FOLLOW THEM CAREFULLY!

LYRICS


See I remember I was just a loner
Look at me

I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams
I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams

I'm on top permanently
But I stay in the streets
And I won't stop bringing the heat
It's my dream
Say it's my dream

i had a dream i would rise to the top
you haters like it or not
whose number one i got my eyes on your spot
the westcoast treat me like i was pac
now all i need is the whole world to bang crooked i on your block
im out the hood if you couldnt tell
ive been stabbed shot at and put in jail
ive been homeless in places you wouldnt dwell
feel these words as if they were put in brail
i did not lose cuz i knew that i couldnt fail
now on this track me and akon are cell mates
my 16s so fly i call them jail bait
now ima take us to the t.o.p.
put this on g.o.d.
homie this c.o.b.

See I remember I was just a loner
Hangin' on the corner
Take a look at me now
Big bossin'
Steady stackin' chips
Never thought that I would see that shit
Now I'm on top permanently
But I stay in the streets
And I won't stop bringing the heat
It's my dream
Say it's my dream

late nights on the corner crooked had him a dream
to drive a maroon 5 call him adam levine
never miss managed the green
cuz thats vanishing cream
i grind all night and my man a machine
i dream big like i was kareem bigs
in my dreams all i see is whips and mean cribs
love my momma cuz look what she did
on her knees like please god can you help me feed these kids
to my deadbeat father crooked's ya child
you didnt raise me your crazy look at me now
its like im solar everyday your sun gon come up
if money talks my pockets wont shut up
gotta work hard just to reach what you desire
if your like me than im preaching to the choir
ey man in my region im messiah
eastsider im the reason long beach is on fire
[Dream Big Lyrics On http://www.elyricsworld.com/ ]

See I remember I was just a loner
Hangin' on the corner
Take a look at me now(Look at me)
Big bossin'
Steady stackin' chips
Never thought that I would see that shit
Now I'm on top permanently
But I stay in the streets
And I won't stop bringing the heat
It's my dream(You know it's my dream)
Say it's my dream(Yes believe it's my dream)

i had a dream i would win it all
but when you haters get involved
you be dream and prayin to see a nigga fall
wait a minute y'all
im gettin paper from cali to Senegal
then spend it all in the mall
im the rapper that the hood like to talk about
the one the onliners would love to write a blog about
fill a chat log about
cats wanna beef in my city whats that all bout?
later ima dog em out
dog im out giant blur
your eyes observe
me drive and swurve
the fly in ???
its i in her she my fly hawaiin islan-der
and im her sir
she loves me i never ran from nothin
even paralyzed people gotta stand for somethin
and i stand on the block tryin to get that green
money machine go brrr ding yahh meann

See I remember I was just a loner
Hangin' on the corner
Take a look at me now
Big bossin'
Steady stackin' chips
Never thought that I would see that shit
Now I'm on top permanently
But I stay in the streets
And I won't stop bringing the heat
It's my dream
Say it's my dream

I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams
I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams
I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams
I dream, you dream, we all dream, Dream Big !

Yeahh, it was all a dream
misslibertine
03-10-2009
"I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams"

that sounds like a nursery rhyme.
JoJo2
03-10-2009
''see a nigga fall''
'wait a minute y'all''

Oh yes, I see what he did there, rhymed the words ''fall'' with ''y'all'' and chucked in the word nigga. Soo f*cking original and out there.

''stacking chips''
''see that shit''

There, he did it again, rhymed the word shit with chips. He actually used a swear word and rapped about makin' money. So dang original!

''I'm from da hood, Akon is my homie, people call me pac, westcoast'' .. If there was some kind of list for most overused words in rap music, they all have to be in there near the top. Rappin about making it big, haters being jealous, niggas, being homesless, being shot, being put in jail, yadda yadda is so 1990s and they must be the most repeated subjects to rap about along with most used words.


''feel these words like they were braille''

Oh yeah, I get it, feel the words, feel the words.. FEEL the words god dammit! About the only part of the song that used clever wordplay and it wan't that spectacular.


About as original as The Saturdays! Or is it Candy Rock? Actually, is it Girls Aloud? Oh I don't know, all these original artists, gets me so confused, I say it gets me so confused...
JoJo2
03-10-2009
Originally Posted by misslibertine:
“"I dream, you dream, we all dream, big dreams"

that sounds like a nursery rhyme.”

I scream, you scream, we all scream for ice cream
misslibertine
03-10-2009
Originally Posted by JoJo2:
“''see a nigga fall''
'wait a minute y'all''

Oh yes, I see what he did there, rhymed the words ''fall'' with ''y'all'' and chucked in the word nigga. Soo f*cking original and out there.

''stacking chips''
''see that shit''

There, he did it again, rhymed the word shit with chips. He actually used a swear word and rapped about makin' money. So dang original!

''I'm from da hood, Akon is my homie, people call me pac, westcoast'' .. If there was some kind of list for most overused words in rap music, they all have to be in there near the top. Rappin about making it big, haters being jealous, niggas, being homesless, being shot, being put in jail, yadda yadda is so 1990s and they must be the most repeated subjects to rap about along with most used words.


''feel these words like they were braille''

Oh yeah, I get it, feel the words, feel the words.. FEEL the words god dammit! About the only part of the song that used clever wordplay and it wan't that spectacular.


About as original as The Saturdays! Or is it Candy Rock? Actually, is it Girls Aloud? Oh I don't know, all these original artists, gets me so confused, I say it gets me so confused...”

post of the day. no doubt.
timperry26
03-10-2009
Rap doesnt have to be rhythm

Just meaning some of the lyrics some up society today

"in my dreams all i see is whips and mean cribs
love my momma cuz look what she did
on her knees like please god can you help me feed these kids
to my deadbeat father crooked's ya child
you didnt raise me your crazy look at me now
its like im solar everyday your sun gon come up
if money talks my pockets wont shut up
gotta work hard just to reach what you desire
if your like me than im preaching to the choir
ey man in my region im messiah
eastsider im the reason long beach is on fire
"
That just sums up the breakdown in communications in some family's, which has resulted in many kids nowadays not having a role model like father!

These lyrics kill it though
ive been homeless in places you wouldnt dwell
feel these words as if they were put in brail
i did not lose cuz i knew that i couldnt fail
misslibertine
03-10-2009
Originally Posted by timperry26:
“Rap doesnt have to be rhythm

Just meaning some of the lyrics some up society today

"in my dreams all i see is whips and mean cribs
love my momma cuz look what she did
on her knees like please god can you help me feed these kids
to my deadbeat father crooked's ya child
you didnt raise me your crazy look at me now
its like im solar everyday your sun gon come up
if money talks my pockets wont shut up
gotta work hard just to reach what you desire
if your like me than im preaching to the choir
ey man in my region im messiah
eastsider im the reason long beach is on fire
"
That just sums up the breakdown in communications in some family's, which has resulted in many kids nowadays not having a role model like father!

These lyrics kill it though
ive been homeless in places you wouldnt dwell
feel these words as if they were put in brail
i did not lose cuz i knew that i couldnt fail”

my problem is nothing to do with the "rhythm".

it's the poor lyrics.
timperry26
03-10-2009
OK, if you havent listen to the SONG, posted at TOP!

Sometimes lyrics sound better in songs!
fezxenakis
03-10-2009
Originally Posted by JoJo2:
“''see a nigga fall''
'wait a minute y'all''

Oh yes, I see what he did there, rhymed the words ''fall'' with ''y'all'' and chucked in the word nigga. Soo f*cking original and out there.

''I'm from da hood, Akon is my homie, people call me pac, westcoast'' .. If there was some kind of list for most overused words in rap music, they all have to be in there near the top. Rappin about making it big, haters being jealous, niggas, being homesless, being shot, being put in jail, yadda yadda is so 1990s and they must be the most repeated subjects to rap about along with most used words.
”

That was an excellently constructed reply and if you start at the top and rap it through it almost fits the song!? Well some of it does, we just need to tweak it a bit more and add in a few rhymes. I've highlighted some of the rhymes already:

y'all and ga - nal and there
pac and coast - most and rap (that's kind of backwards but you could still make it work
top - shot

It needs a few more but I bet you could turn any bit of prose into rap with the convoluted rhyme schemes you can get away with.

I know, I'm a sad man. Rhyming is fun.
timperry26
03-10-2009
Yeh

It's a quality song!

-------------------------------------------------

Lupe new album is coming out pretty called titled "Lasers". I've the snippet it sounds extremely good!

Listen to the 30sec snippet!The beat SOUNDS very good

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hh4WkT0ghoo

Tell me what u think! BOY has he got talent
misslibertine
03-10-2009
Originally Posted by timperry26:
“OK, if you havent listen to the SONG, posted at TOP!

Sometimes lyrics sound better in songs! ”

i don't really want to listen to it, tbh.

i can tell i wouldn't like it from the lyrics, they don't mean anything to me.
timperry26
03-10-2009
U Listened to the lupe fiasco 30sec snippet
VIEW DESKTOP SITE TOP

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