Since someone else who didn't even make the original thread has been selfish and taken over, we are no longer allowed to submit parts to the stories. This thread is the same idea but, since that was a failure, this thread has different rules.

I. The usual - no spamming, advertising, being rude etc.
II. There will be no website. What's the point, when there's a thread?
III. You are limited to about ten lines each. Try and discuss the plot and twists with each other.
IV. There will be no MULTIPLE threads this time. That is spamming, so all episodes will be on one thread.
V. Don't take over!!!

So, without furtherado, here is the first part (continuing from Episode 2):


EPISODE 3

Roston stared around the beautiful interior of the TARDIS, mouth agape in amazement. Jasmine laughed and beamed a smile at him. He looked at her, but she looked away quickly, stroking her hair with her hand. The Doctor raised his eyebrows.

"Right then. Manchester. Allon-sy!".

Jasmine had returned to normal. "Manchester it is then. I want to see my purple car again..."

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Well it's true, isn't it? You both decided to write whole stories by yourself, destroying the point of everybody joining together.

Look, cant you all just take your fanfic to a fanfic site and stop starting pointless threads?

this forum is to discuss dr who, not try and write it (and poorly i might add in my opinion)

exactly its your opinion,everyones allowed one but at the end of the day these stories were about dr who so were in the correct section,just because they annoyed you doesnt make them any less relevant to the section were posting in

Do a quick straw poll of DW fans who know what their talking about and ask them if fanfic that includes a Cyberman uttering the immortal phrase 'WTF' is worth the time and effort or not....im guessing not

Whats next? Daleks PMSL?

Listen Witchy-Boy! This additional post has been added due to your complaint in the first place! This brilliant network and past time we had has gone tits up thanks to you and your snide comments! No one wants to hear them as all you do is complain! Now just LEAVE US ALONE! We will continue writing on here! That way others can write too, like Iglex and Gareth! By the way you two, we created the site as a way to gather the story lines together. Also, i have written storylines for a while and i thought i could use the site as a way to publish the stories! But we can continue on this site as well! Why? Because of the that Cutout witch thats who! We will continue the stories, and if you don't like it Cutout Witch, make a 'we don't like the episode writer' forum!

DALEKADDISON HAS SPOKEN!!!!!

i agree that stuff was silly and totally not how a cyberman would speak,and as far as i am aware was disreagred in the end story due to its wrongness(or maybe not,dont know as ive not registered at the new site)

and whats all this stuff about who knows what they are talking about,i think its a bit silly to be in a Dr Who section and not have at least a basic knowledge of the subject matter,dont you agree?

Listen! I added that phrase as a joke! It can easily be removed. And you don't even have to read it. You can just look at the forums that interest you, and we will look at the forums that interest us.

Got that?

So we'll carry on writing on this site. As well as the site.

Thank you

Dalek addison is out

Like i said. cybermen saying 'wtf'. thats all that needs saying.

and im not a boy...otherwise id be the cut out wizard. do keep up

grrr, i don't care! Leave us alone.

Get on your broom and fly off!

Forever!!!!!!!!!!!

Now i am leaving.

lol

The Doctor,Jasmine and Roston were in the TARDIS
"Where to next?" asked The Doctor
"after the last few adventures,somewhere quiet Doctor " said Roston
"Yeah im exhausted" said Jasmine
"Right then,how about the Leisure Planet of Nova 7,lovely this time of year,Beautiful Sands of Green and Blue"
"That sounds Lovely "said Jasmine and with that the Doctor shouted "Off we Go!" and pulled a lever on the TARDIS Console

The TARDIS started to fly out of control,Cloister Bell sounding

"somethings pulling us towards somewhere but i have no clue where" said The Doctor with that the TARDIS landed

"Time to find out where we are" said the Doctor,with that he opened the TARDIS doors and with a shocked face he said "I get a feeling were not in Kansas anymore"

he looked out and saw the familiar Landscape of Malcassairo before him

"No no no no no! Not here. Not now!" the Doctor yelled as sparks erupted from the TARDIS console.

"What's so bad about Malcassairo?" Roston asked. "Up on the Platform it used to be a holiday planet,"

"Like Butlins but bigger?" Jasmine piped up, receiving odd looks from the Doctor and Roston.

"I was here before: means we've travelled to the end of the universe. It's the year 100000000000000 Roston. Humans are persecuted, and for some reason I'm being drawn back there,"

you really are a witch arent you?! NONE OF US CAN HAVE OUR FUN!

from the fact that you seem to have some problem with me, you dont even understand what fun is! we are all entitled to have our fun, there is far more fanfiction our there than we will ever write in our lifetime, so please, iof you don't like it, DON'T CLICK ON THE BLOODY THREAD!

"Last time i was here,i encountered a man who called himself Professor YANA,but actually he was The Master,another Timelord who is just plain bad,and has been a foe of mine for a long time" said the Doctor

he looked at the TARDIS Console "Local Date is 1000 years before my last encounter with this Planet,so The Master isnt here yet,lets go and find out whats brought us here" said The Doctor

"Allons-y!"

what does your name mean?

and i dont have any problem with you.

i just happen to not be a fan of dalek karoke videos and fan fic. nothing personal.

The Doctor stepped out of the TARDIS, feeling the cold wind bite his tousled hair. Jasmine and Roston followed shortly, both dressed casually. If they had expected leisure, they were far from it.

A man stumbled from out of nowhere into their path, his hands clutched to his face in tears. He walked straight through Roston and continued walking.

"Doctor? Was that a ghost?" Roston asked, a hint of fear in his voice.

"Nah, don't be stupid. Ghosts don't exist anyway!" the Doctor rebuffed him. The man turned to face them, and to the Doctor's horror it was shaped similar to Jack Harkness.

"Time is strong here: the Time Lords probably had something to do with this rock. Cause that man isn't here for another 1,000 years..."

My name is quite simple. it was going to be Kaledmasterme, like on youtube, but DS wasnt accepting it, cos apparently it was too short.

but the image of davros doing the bird was quite amusing

ok fair point. can we at LEAST carry on writing this episode and not be childish? thank you =D

Just moving it back up

will get back to writing later tonight,just busy with christmassy stuff

anyone gona bother writing any more?