well most of you know that i made a bad script erler in the year



well i decide to to try agian ad here it is


Dr who the phone earth part 1

Inside the tardis the Dr and Amy are planning were to go although the Dr is already darting around the tardis hitting buttons

Amy: where are we going?

Dr : earth

Walking outside the tardis they see 2 wired things

Dr: something’s wrong

Spiketron1: (in a funny voice) give me your number

Spiketron2: (in funny voice) or meet our leader

DR: Amy don’t

Amy: I wasn’t going to Dr. anyway why not

DR: because there not human Amy (turning to weird things) I am the Dr who are you?

Both spiktrons: we are spiktrons. We have heard about you Dr
you must meet our leader!

In the spiktrons base the Dr and Amy are about to be introduced
to their leader who is more familiar then it seems

Spiketron1: meet our leader

Phone killer: I am phone killer

Dr: (surprised) but you can’t they died out years ago

Phone killer: that’s where your wrong.

Amy: (when phone killer is talking) em Dr its important

Dr (annoyed) Amy can’t you see I’m busy!

Amy: Dr he...


Just then the Dr turns around and Amy is nowhere to be seen...

please comment

Hey,

I think it's a valiant attempt at a script and has a lot of room for an interesting plot

I think I recall your first script and this is an improvement. All the best.

thanks im puting part 2 on later