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Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 3)

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archiver wrote: »
Musings while trying to code web pages recently:

Redo from start.

I know too much already,
now my head is getting heavy
and my little pinkies aren't very well.
CSS is cool,
but I'm too much old school
to learn to do HTML.

It's the same with C++.
I got BASIC just
when object oriented came out.
I could do some assembler,
but I never remember
what classes and pointers are about.

Give me firewall configs
and name server digs
and I apt-get along real fine.
But cascading style?
I just run a mile.
Too many ways to align.

© archiver.


And; while being undecided:

I'm free.

You know; to be or not to be, can sometimes be - the sanity of quiet free.
Or merge the cold and shiny words, as told to me by men and birds.

For now, fear I no smiley tap. No vengeful strap may sheer my nap.
For style and famous doth corrupt. Who knows what mad men may obstruct
this freedom to be quite unknown. Can't catch me - I'm all alone.

Or © my name and my number? Would I really write hereunder
all the things I'd want to say, if you could come and break my day?

No then. Well fank frank for that. Perhaps I'll buy a pussy cat.
You'll never know the real me. Hallelujah! I am free.

© archiver.

This thread is a continuation of: Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 2)
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    Biffo the BearBiffo the Bear Posts: 25,861
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    Ere I walk anon,
    With grandeur and aplomb.

    Ere I lay, alack,
    I have smoked too much crack.

    © Biffo the Bear 2011
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    archiverarchiver Posts: 13,011
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    Ere I walk anon,
    With grandeur and aplomb.

    Ere I lay, alack,
    I have smoked too much crack.

    © Biffo the Bear 2011
    I can tell it's going to be a great Part 3 Mr B. :D
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    boxxboxx Posts: 5,335
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    What must've been said, in this thread, to make it so very dead?
    Oh, part 3, I see, silly me.
    © boxx 2011:p
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Three very interesting poems Archiver :) It's a pity One Sky got left behind on the other thread :eek:

    Hi Biffo :) I don't remember that in your Beano exploits :eek: :D

    Welcome to Part 3 everyone :D
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    SassernachSassernach Posts: 1,725
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    Well here to part three cos two has gone.
    It now lies in history with part one.
    Is poetry dead an art long past.
    not here, not here on DS.

    Now they clamour to get the last post.
    The poem to end and yet begin the next thread.
    Who will decide what that poem will be.
    Not the poet but the powers that be.

    Congratulations on your third thread.

    :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Ey oop Sasser :D That's a great ditty to help kick off Part 3 - thanks :D
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    the quest

    I need to find an ebb and flow that renders
    The undertow and those romantic splendours
    So tangible the hardest heart surrenders.

    Where every wave is full of dreams that last
    And every fountain guides a golden mast
    And every ripple slides into the past.

    Where sirens are so beautiful young princes
    Learn of a love so special it evinces
    A memory that's lost and yet convinces.

    The seeker cannot put aside his quest
    Until he finds this sea-home and can rest
    Submerged in deeps harmonious and blessed.


    ©
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    Troy EdwardsTroy Edwards Posts: 997
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    the quest
    ©


    An exquisitely crafted poem Musty with remarkable imagery.


    Blinding stuff indeed!


    :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    An exquisitely crafted poem Musty with remarkable imagery.

    Blinding stuff indeed!
    Thank you Troy :) Most of this one came to me while I was wandering around Horsham recently. That's ok, but it's important to memorize key rhymes when you're out or the poem can get forgotten.
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 1,333
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    Methinks for our betterment we'd be better for far more smiles
    Pity is that petulance and frowns can be much more prevalent
    Our mood may be low to midling, down or deeply direly worse
    Polarities of blandishments morph through perversity to curse
    Among our frail accomplishments make best of humour's bent
    Jokes help you through dark waters and stab at blue crocodiles

    Frank.
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    BizBiz Posts: 14,756
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    Noe Soap wrote: »
    Methinks for our betterment we'd be better for far more smiles
    Pity is that petulance and frowns can be much more prevalent
    Our mood may be low to midling, down or deeply direly worse
    Polarities of blandishments morph through perversity to curse
    Among our frail accomplishments make best of humour's bent
    Jokes help you through dark waters and stab at blue crocodiles

    Frank.

    Good advice, Frank. From now on I'm going to keep a few jokes handy in my backpack incase I encounter any blue crocodiles. :D

    Interesting pattern of line endings there. :)
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    BizBiz Posts: 14,756
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    Lovely to see the new chapter buzzing. :)
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    spiney2spiney2 Posts: 27,058
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    "Real Programmers use JCL" !

    Everyone knows

    Linux is much better than WIndows

    But will it run on my computer? Well, here goes ..........
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Noe Soap wrote: »
    Our mood may be low to middling, down or deeply direly worse
    As you say Frank, smiles are better by far but it's so hard to avoid different mood swings. An interesting ode :)
    Biz wrote: »
    Lovely to see the new chapter buzzing. :)
    Hi Biz :) Our third tenancy! Quite a feat for poetry :D
    spiney2 wrote: »
    Linux is much better than WIndows
    Speaking as a true techno-numpty, you lost me there Spiney :D
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 1,333
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    Actress Elizabeth Taylor died from a heart failure,
    a heart put severely to many a test pursuing love.
    She tangled on many a reef that ensnare errant
    relationshipwrecks. Matters of her heart's desires
    occupied oursilver screen goddess in a Sargasso
    Sea of romantic love. Mortal she was though rich
    in so many ways. death tragedy and ill health as
    constant visitors as those to her Hollywood star.
    Beauty would tarnish naturally from those heights
    given by fortune's providence but a cloak of grace
    would tarry and settle around this elegant person.
    Elizabeth's tender heart rent so often rendered rest;
    great life: mega epic, modern Cleopatra to: The End.
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    BizBiz Posts: 14,756
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    Our third tenancy! Quite a feat for poetry :D

    So we're agreed. Poetry is not a dead art. :)
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    BizBiz Posts: 14,756
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    spiney2 wrote: »
    "Real Programmers use JCL" !

    Everyone knows

    Linux is much better than WIndows

    But will it run on my computer? Well, here goes ..........

    I'm the same as Musty, but my curiosity got the better of me :-

    From Wikipedia - Job Control Language (JCL) is a scripting language used on IBM mainframe operating systems to instruct the system on how to run a batch job or start a subsystem. The term "Job Control Language" can also be used generically to refer to all languages which perform these functions, such as Burroughs' WFL and ICL's OCL. This article is specifically about IBM's JCL.

    Let us know the result of the venture - in verse of course, if that is possible - unfortunately I haven't the gift. :)
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 2,290
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    I find most Poetry a load of pish !

    :o
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    boxxboxx Posts: 5,335
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    You prefer fish?
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Biz wrote: »
    From Wikipedia - Job Control Language (JCL) is a scripting language used on IBM mainframe operating systems to instruct the system on how to run a batch job or start a subsystem. The term "Job Control Language" can also be used generically to refer to all languages which perform these functions, such as Burroughs' WFL and ICL's OCL. This article is specifically about IBM's JCL.
    I'm even more lost now :D
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    archiverarchiver Posts: 13,011
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    Some say; it's a load of pish.
    Others; it's a rare dish
    better heard within a song
    to help the mindless day along.

    Some even say; that one short line
    can make their day or mark a time
    when everything was better then.
    What better use for a pen?

    To sign a cheque for some new toy?
    To write to beg for new employ?
    To write off for some chicken feed?
    Or write as if to somehow plead;

    for sanity. For peace of mind.
    It helps me to unwind
    the mysteries of humankind.
    I came, I :eek: and then I rhymed;

    :) archiver
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    [Deleted User][Deleted User] Posts: 2,290
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    boxx wrote: »
    You prefer fish?

    Not even on a dish :(

    :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    Noe Soap wrote: »
    Elizabeth's tender heart rent so often rendered rest;
    great life: mega epic, modern Cleopatra to: The End.
    Another irreplaceable piece of Hollywood falls away :( Nice tribute Frank :)
    archiver wrote: »
    I came, I :eek: and then I rhymed;
    LOL :D Vini vidi vici updated - I like it Archiver :D
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    archiverarchiver Posts: 13,011
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    LOL :D Vini vidi vici updated - I like it Archiver :D
    Thanks Musty. I agree it's a shame One Sky got left on the end of part 2. Redo From Start is too technical for the first in part 3. Oh well, the DS blade cuts and cannot be undone. :)
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    mr. mustardmr. mustard Posts: 48,888
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    archiver wrote: »
    Thanks Musty. I agree it's a shame One Sky got left on the end of part 2. Redo From Start is too technical for the first in part 3. Oh well, the DS blade cuts and cannot be undone. :)
    Never mind Archiver, we'll soon be on page 2 :) Oh, here we are :o:D
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