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Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 3)
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mr. mustard
08-11-2012
Island of dreamers

Island of dreamers, oasis I love
Where there lie vistas of turquoise above,
Those who adore it can’t wait to set sail,
Secretive ships on a paradise trail.

Here where the homecoming albatross glides
Nothing but beauty is seen on all sides,
I'm soon relaxed by the long sunny days
Caught in the ambience of the warm haze.

Stowaways lost on a white sandy beach
Glad to gain freedom and stay out of reach,
Gently this shoreline refreshes and bathes
Shells left for years to incoming blue waves.

Letting the mind ease while sipping a drink
With all the time in the world just to think,
Sometimes a magic I thought lost in me
Wakes when I stare at the deeps of the sea.

And as the breeze sings her sweet serenade
Through leaning palm trees that spread cooling shade
O how the afternoon moments inspire,
Island of dreamers, the place I desire.


©
Ovalteenie
09-11-2012
I really don't mean to be nosey
And I really don't mean to be soppy
But I hear Musty's got a new book of poesy
So I just had to order myself a copy

I shall read it when on the train
And let the verses transport me to another place
Of ancient standing stones on a grassy plain
Or another trip to Mars in outer space
mr. mustard
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Ovalteenie:
“I shall read it when on the train
And let the verses transport me to another place
Of ancient standing stones on a grassy plain”

Great write Ovalteenie - I got the image of you reading the book on a night train dreaming of Avebury

Thanks so much again for buying it
Ovalteenie
09-11-2012
Thanks Musty congratulations on the book & am looking forward to it
sandydune
09-11-2012
Well done, hope your book sells well, mr mustard
Troy Edwards
09-11-2012
Musty's book is, of course, wonderful and it really does make a difference to me reading a poem in a 'proper' book rather than on the internet.

Somehow seems to give the poems more gravitas, as it were.
Biz
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“Island of dreamers

©”

Dreamer that you are, you don't really need to go there do you. Not having your imagination, I bought myself a DVD of "The Best Caribbean Beaches". and have been known to sit watching it while listening to the gentle surf breaking. Very relaxing.
Biz
09-11-2012
Welcome to Ovalteenie, the instant poet. Don't forget to let the other passengers have a good view of the beautiful book cover.

I agree with you Sandy. I would have said here, here, but I can never remember whether it is that or hear, hear, but you know what I mean.

I also would rather read the printed page Troy and it's easier to find a poem by glancing down the index. It's not so easy on the internet.
mr. mustard
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by sandydune:
“Well done, hope your book sells well, mr mustard”

Originally Posted by Ovalteenie:
“Thanks Musty congratulations on the book & am looking forward to it ”

Originally Posted by Troy Edwards:
“Musty's book is, of course, wonderful and it really does make a difference to me reading a poem in a 'proper' book rather than on the internet.”

Thanks so much everyone, I've been humbled by most peoples' kind words and wishes on DS

( I'm working flat-out on a follow up which will be much larger with no increase in cost )
Originally Posted by Biz:
“Dreamer that you are, you don't really need to go there do you. Not having your imagination, I bought myself a DVD of "The Best Caribbean Beaches"”

Sounds lovely Biz, almost akin to meditation
mr. mustard
09-11-2012
another circus

The Ringmaster entered and something felt wrong
The Big Tent lacked people and sound

The juggler let plates spin and wobble too long
And all of them smashed on the ground

The confident tamer who lashed the whip straight
Now dreaded each tiger and lion

The strong man attempted to pick up a weight
Yet struggled to lift heavy iron

The man who ate fire was gripped by such fear
He poured water on the flame’s source

The girl who did tricks with no saddle could steer
But failed to control her own horse

The boy on the tightrope fell minus a net
The Ringmaster looked at the clown

Who left with a smile and a terrible threat,
The ghost circus had come to town.


©
Biz
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“another circus

©”

Wow! I'm not going to see that.
mr. mustard
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Biz:
“Wow! I'm not going to see that.”

If you do, get a refund Biz
Biz
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“If you do, get a refund Biz ”

I wouldn't dare to ask.
Mrs Teapot
09-11-2012
5 Minute Quickie

I have a book arrived today
It's looks quite good I have to say
A little read I've had a chance
It merits more than just a glance
Each page is filled with words and rhyme
Tomorrow I will give it extra time
Feet up and coffee near to hand
The weekend is looking really grand


Actually read a few and just had one read out to me
sandydune
09-11-2012
To Mr Mustard


Those rhymes and words that you do tell
enjoyed by much, done very well
keep it up, for Volume 2
wait to hear, more poems new
done with thought, to and so
be proud and grand, go, go, go.

Bigshorts
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Ovalteenie:
“Thanks Musty congratulations on the book & am looking forward to it ”

You will not be disappointed.
Ovalteenie
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Mrs Teapot:
“5 Minute Quickie

I have a book arrived today
It's looks quite good I have to say
A little read I've had a chance
It merits more than just a glance
Each page is filled with words and rhyme
Tomorrow I will give it extra time
Feet up and coffee near to hand
The weekend is looking really grand


Actually read a few and just had one read out to me”

Wow you're good

Ovalteenie
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Bigshorts:
“You will not be disappointed. ”

Thanks & yes i will be reading it on public transport... it might not go un-noticed by other passengers too
Mrs Teapot
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Ovalteenie:
“Wow you're good

”

I usually do Humpty Dumpty ones

In seriousness we have to try to get our wee ones to understand rhyme and have fun doing so, I make up daft words that will rhyme with their name.......if your name rhymes with ****** you can do such a thing
mr. mustard
09-11-2012
Originally Posted by Mrs Teapot:
“Feet up and coffee near to hand
The weekend is looking really grand ”

Originally Posted by sandydune:
“Those rhymes and words that you do tell
enjoyed by much, done very well
keep it up, for Volume 2”

It's always nice to have a poem written for you Thanks Mrs T and Sandy You can't beat some quiet time letting a bit of verse take you away, or reflect on something you may have felt but not seen through poetry's unique lens.
mr. mustard
10-11-2012
Originally Posted by Bigshorts:
“You will not be disappointed. ”

Cheers Biggie

Originally Posted by Ovalteenie:
“Thanks & yes i will be reading it on public transport... it might not go un-noticed by other passengers too ”

Maybe George Osborne could read it there too
sandydune
10-11-2012
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“It's always nice to have a poem written for you Thanks Mrs T and Sandy You can't beat some quiet time letting a bit of verse take you away, or reflect on something you may have felt but not seen through poetry's unique lens.”

yes, so true Mr Mustard and also thanks to Mrs Teapot for some inspiration with her words
mr. mustard
10-11-2012
Originally Posted by sandydune:
“yes, so true Mr Mustard and also thanks to Mrs Teapot for some inspiration with her words”

Definitely Sandy - the Teapot quill rocks
Troy Edwards
10-11-2012
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“another circus
©”



Blinding stuff Musty.




Love the user names Mrs Teapot, Sandydune and Ovateenie btw.

Biz
10-11-2012
Wow! What a lovely surprise to see you all. You really should all pop in more often. The more the merrier. \0/ \0/
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