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Old 10-04-2012, 00:08
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This drama which airs on Tuesdays is quite similar to Waterloo Road however focuses mainly on the teachers and not the pupils.

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Miss Helena Baker- 34,Headteacher and engaged to Michael Jenkins.

Mrs Sadie Blake- 40, Deputy Headteacher, Head Of Maths, Married for twelve years.

Mr Michael Jenkins- 36, Head Of Science and engaged to Helena Baker.

Mr Austin Wiles- 25, Head of P.E, single.

Miss Suzanne Vickers- 27, Head of English, single.

Mr Shaun White- 49, Head of History/Geography, married for twenty eight years.

Mrs Layla Barnes- 39, Head Of Performing Arts, married for two years.

Mrs Leanne Wicks- 30, Secetary and married for eight months.

Mr Hugh Edwards- 51, Maths Teacher and divorced.

Mrs Stella Crawford- 54, English Teacher and married for thirty one years.
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Old 10-04-2012, 00:10
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Series One, Episode One

Austin and Suzanne decide to put their kiss to bed and remain friends. Helena welcomes new Secetary
Leanne who seems to annoy many teachers including Hugh and Michael. Shaun is left nervous when he returns back to school following his car accident the year before.
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Old 10-04-2012, 00:15
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Series One, Episode Two

Helena is worried Leanne isn't who she seems when she checks her Internet search and finds an illegal immigrant website! Suzanne is driven to the edge when she shares another kiss with Austin. Layla is relieved when she discovers she isn't pregnant.
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Old 10-04-2012, 00:18
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Series One, Episode Three

Hugh and Stella comfort Shaun when he suffers a nervous break down. Helena is more anxious when she finds Leanne taking mystery phone calls. Sadie and Michael are worried when Helena goes missing.
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Old 10-04-2012, 00:20
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Series One, Episode Four

The teachers search for Helena but are worried when they hear a criminal has escaped prison. Hugh is a shoulder to cry on for Shaun when his wife says she has had enough. Suzanne is scared when she discovers she is pregnant.
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Old 10-04-2012, 10:17
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Series One, Episode Five

When Helena is found severely hurt and with no memory Sadie takes over but straight away gets suspicious with Leanne. Shaun is determined not to break down again but when he and Hugh have an argument his life is sent into a mess again. Suzanne decides to tell Austin that she is pregnant but why is he determined it isn't his?
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Old 10-04-2012, 10:19
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SERIES FINAL DISASTER REVEALED

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Old 10-04-2012, 10:27
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It is a good concept for a Drama, yet I feel the synopsis lacks in detail, which would be okay for Drama's we are about to physically watch, but we need more detail to connect with a written Drama.

Even though you have said it will focus mainly on the Teachers, it would be nice to have little sub-plots or interactions with the Pupils.

I like the Series Final Disaster concept, its something we haven't really seen.

Don't take my feedback the wrong way, I'm only trying to help you improve your Drama and Writing
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Old 10-04-2012, 10:30
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It is a good concept for a Drama, yet I feel the synopsis lacks in detail, which would be okay for Drama's we are about to physically watch, but we need more detail to connect with a written Drama.

Even though you have said it will focus mainly on the Teachers, it would be nice to have little sub-plots or interactions with the Pupils.

I like the Series Final Disaster concept, its something we haven't really seen.

Don't take my feedback the wrong way, I'm only trying to help you improve your Drama and Writing
Yeh, I was planning on writing the full episodes when the synopsises have been revealed
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Old 10-04-2012, 10:36
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Hi, I'm 12. It's nice to have someone on here close to my age, because lots of the people on here seem quite a lot older than me.

I do agree with LM though, if your synopses had a little more detail, your soap would be amazing.

I haven't really done much soap writing, but I have seen lots of them, and you really need a lot of detail for a soap that isn't televised.

Otherwise, you may not capture the imagination of the readers, and it may not be as much as a success as you would like.

I'll be following.

EDIT: I'll look forward to seeing the full episodes.
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Old 10-04-2012, 10:47
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Series One, Episode Six- Final Episode

To celebrate Suzannes pregnancy, the teachers decide to go to stay for the night at 'The Posh Hotel' in London however on the way disaster strikes as the minibus they are on spirals out of control and falls off a cliff. Some teachers are feared dead and others seriously hurt, who will be killed?

Episode 1 Coming Soon!
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Old 10-04-2012, 13:49
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Episode One- Part One

The usual school bell raced through the school whilst hundreds of all sized pupils ran to their classrooms, their bags half falling off. Meanwhile, the headteacher, Miss Helena Baker had a problem on her hands- a new secetary. Three women sat outside her office on the leather lounger chairs she had bought just a month before. One lady, was thin yet tall and quite elderly, she wore glasses and a large handbag rested in her hand. Her name was Joan Wakefield. Next to her was a small, fat lady who was chewing gum. She had greasy hair and was reading 'Womens Weekly' she looked in her mid forties but all crinkles were hidden by the amount of sweat that poured over her forehead. She wore a nametag saying 'Grace Redfern'. Finally, sat on the other side of Grace was a young girl with fake tan and brown hair scrunched up in a bun, she wore posh glasses aswell as a large ruby ring on her Wedding Finger. She was sat with her legs crossed gazing into her high heeled shoes. The young girl wore a name tag saying 'Leanne Wicks'. Helena pulled open her door, she carried a large amount of files and paperwork, then she said amongst the big heap "Thank you for your patience, you may come through now!".
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