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Is Poetry a Dead Art? (Part 4)
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Bobbysmom
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by mr. mustard:
“My final corrections are going well, which is leaving me more time in t'library I shall start catching up on the thread today ”


How lovely to see you back Mr Mustard.

I can tell that you are a true lover of poetry and you obviously take a lot of time out to read and inwardly digest all that's written here.

I'm guessing it's sort of like .... your baby .... type thing

And by the way .... I adore your stuff. I WILL be buying your book
Keyser_Soze1
30-08-2016
Here is my first attempt - total rubbish but at least I had a go.

White shark.

Eyes of obsidian black.

Power and merciless serenity of a God.

Ruler over oceans of time.

In danger from a sapient pygmy.
Bobbysmom
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by Keyser_Soze1:
“Here is my first attempt - total rubbish but at least I had a go.

White shark.

Eyes of obsidian black.

The power and merciless serenity of a God.

Ruler over oceans of time.

In danger from a sapient pygmy.”

I don't think its total rubbish .... it paints a clear picture in a few words.

That's not so easy to do. I certainly have to blurb on endlessly to get the same result so good on you
Keyser_Soze1
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“I don't think its total rubbish .... it paints a clear picture in a few words.

That's not so easy to do. I certainly have to blurb on endlessly to get the same result so good on you ”

Thanks - I edited it slightly.
belly button
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by Keyser_Soze1:
“Here is my first attempt - total rubbish but at least I had a go.

White shark.

Eyes of obsidian black.

Power and merciless serenity of a God.

Ruler over oceans of time.

In danger from a sapient pygmy.”

That's very powerful Keyser. I think you are in a good place to right about the animal world. I don't think there has been a dinosaur poem in this thread
Keyser_Soze1
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by belly button:
“That's very powerful Keyser. I think you are in a good place to right about the animal world. I don't think there has been a dinosaur poem in this thread ”

Thanks, I am not at my best at the moment but when I feel a bit better will think of doing one.
belly button
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by Keyser_Soze1:
“Thanks, I am not at my best at the moment but when I feel a bit better will think of doing one.”

I'll look forward to you trying to rhythm something with Piatnitzkysaurus.
I think writing poetry seems to help some people when they feel a bit lost with the world. Maybe you could give it a try. Feel better soon
Keyser_Soze1
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by belly button:
“I'll look forward to you trying to rhythm something with Piatnitzkysaurus.
I think writing poetry seems to help some people when they feel a bit lost with the world. Maybe you could give it a try. Feel better soon ”

Thanks. X
flower 2
30-08-2016
The Tor without a scene...

At times the Tor seems sometimes flat
And no matter where you are at
No matter how hard it is for you
Let the scene come shining through.
belly button
30-08-2016
Originally Posted by Keyser_Soze1:
“Thanks. X”

http://www.kiplingsociety.co.uk/poems_if.htm
Bobbysmom
31-08-2016
Originally Posted by belly button:
“ I think writing poetry seems to help some people when they feel a bit lost with the world.”

You are SO right there belly button.
Bobbysmom
31-08-2016
Poetry is sometimes the BEST medicine.


I felt quite rough
When my life got tough.
But I got through
and now I'm tickety boo.

At my very worst
I knocked out a verse.
I wrote another one
and then continued on.

It's better than moping,
and a great way of coping
with stuff that knocks us flat.
Enough already of THAT!
archiver
01-09-2016
Past Ten'ts.

Oh purple tin of amber nectar
gurgle deep within conjecture
numb my gums and slither down
soon the biggest clown in town.

Big T frosty from the fridge
Refreshing as a new religion
based on what is truly known
and what in fact can be shown.

The squelch of the ring pull
half a litre hand full
shhhhhh as the frothiness
prepares to make me a mess.

First taster instant thrill
tastier than any pill
soon followed by another
and another and its brother.

But, alas and alack
here I sit on my jack
without a drop to my name
which really is quite a shame.

Considering it's been so long.
Considering, but still strong.
Bobbysmom
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by archiver:
“Past Ten'ts.


Considering it's been so long.
Considering, but still strong.”


WOW.

Good on ya archiver!!!
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“And by the way .... I adore your stuff. I WILL be buying your book ”

Thanks very much Ruth I see the thread as everyone's but I guess I have nurtured it over time

They call me Musty by the way - I must get some air freshener
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by mrkeen:
“This should have been forest against Mersey red
But ninety five fans have ended up dead ”

What a moving tribute to the 95. Nuff said Stuart
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“And there's a very funny twinge
twanging in my hip.”

mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by SaturnV:
“"Son" was written by the Russian Jewish poet Pavel Antokolsky,a year after the death of his 18 year old son Lieutenant Vladimir Antokolovsky,killed in action on June 6th,1942”

You can read many books on the war, but I find poetry captures its tragedy more intensely. Armistice Day wouldn't be the same without verse.

Thanks for posting this Saturn
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“Poison”

Always avoid bright colours and specimens of mangelwurzel
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by archiver:
“The Voice.
Observers observed a telly-tubby sun
and stars came out that very night

The Choice”

I hope the alien was Dipsy, I always liked his hat

The Choice is heavy but interesting
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by scottie2121:
“I’m a wannabe singer in a bland boy band
bombing social media - in hope of a helping hand”

A different style from your usual one Scottie. Some good points were made in your song. Apart from Take That, I find most boy bands are talentless oiks
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“The Cycle”

I like the way you put this into four segments Ruth. A positive spin on the eternal questions
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“I, for one, would label this a very excellent thread.
So there you go, I rest my case, poetry is far from dead!”

A lovely tribute to the thread I'm glad you like it here Ruth and I'm always happy when the place is busy! Others must agree with you, going by the amount of views we get
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“And through broken sobs he tells her "My Mother died today".”

WOW, what a twist at the end! The constant rush of modern life tends to kill emotions. I felt so sorry for the boy on the till

An excellent, top-notch write
mr. mustard
01-09-2016
Originally Posted by Bobbysmom:
“Then I found out
You've got a girl.”

It's not nice, is it? It's been a while since I've had a snog
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