Originally Posted by sandydune:
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That's great Musty but I feel I haven't done anything to deserve a ta .
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“
That's great Musty but I feel I haven't done anything to deserve a ta .
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I was veering towards my alteration, but if you'd preferred the original line I might have had doubts
Sometimes poems just need a touch on the tiller to improve them 
So ta




I enjoyed the last verse in particular John, that's a great kiss-off and up yours moment