Originally Posted by Rosie Red:
“Poor acts?
Both the eleven year olds were amazing for their age. Jack Carroll, again, good for his age - and his attitude. Attraction were amazing. Surely eveyone loves the ventriloquist?
I wouldn't think the line-up was any worse than other years, and better than most.”
I wrote 'acts in general'.
Yes the ventriloquist was good, as were Attraction.
However, you highlight the weakness of the acts when you write
Both the eleven year olds were amazing for their age. Jack Carroll, again, good for his age - and his attitude.
If they have to be judged against their age, then they are not outstanding - this was a talent show aimed at all ages and the only criteria is, or should have been, 'talent'.
You can't really include someone's 'attitude' as a measure of talent, or even as a measure of entertainment.
Either acts, and particularly your three examples, are genuinely good, with no qualifying statements, or they are not. By adding those qualifiers you are accepting that they were not as good as an equivalent twenty-something would have been.
We don't write that Attraction were good, considering their ages, for example. Nor do we write that Steve was good, for a man of his experience.