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Old 23-07-2013, 00:57
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"I should be asking you that" barry snapped
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Old 23-07-2013, 01:02
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"I suppose you should! I'm John and this is Mark!" John replied

He then looked on the mantelpiece and saw a picture of the Barry family.

"This is you then! What's your name?" John asked again
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Old 23-07-2013, 01:03
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"Josh" barry lied
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Old 23-07-2013, 01:08
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John looked at Mark. "The boss did say there was a kid named Barry right??"

Mark nodded. John turned back to Barry.

"Don't lie to us! We can find out your name in an instant!" John warned
"Fine! It's Barry Barry...."
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Old 23-07-2013, 03:20
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"Well you better get us our money otherwise all these are ours" John snarled
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Old 23-07-2013, 08:49
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"We don't have all your money..." Barry mumbled before he rushed to grab the jar before he took it back to the men.

"There's about £1000 in here!" Barry said as Mark took it off him

Barry then watched as John and Mark whispered to each other before they both turned back to look at him. John then reached out and grabbed the teenager.
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:34
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"What are you doing????" He asked getting scared now.
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:38
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"Maybe your mum will gather the money quicker if the boss has you!" John said
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:44
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"No chance" barry said trying to wriggle free
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:48
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John held onto his arms tight. "Stop that now! Don't make it more difficult"
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:50
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Barry was scared. "My mum will be back any minute!!" Barry warned.
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:53
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But that didn't scare the men of
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:54
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"Then we'll be quick with this!" John replied
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:55
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They dragged him to the van and drove off.
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Old 23-07-2013, 09:59
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They arrived at a huge mansion about an hour later, Where the loan shark lived.
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:11
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Carol had arrived home to see the state of her house
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:13
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She knew it was the gang that had trashed the place.

Meanwhile, Mark and John were dragging Barry through the mansion.

"LET ME GO!!!" Barry yelled
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:14
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"No" John laughed
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:18
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They dragged Barry into a huge room where another man was sitting at a desk.

"This is one of Carol Barry's kids!" John announced
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:19
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"Is it now" the new man spoke
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:20
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John and Mark nodded.
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:21
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"You having me here won't get your money any quicker!!!!" Barry snapped.
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:23
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"You think" the men laughed
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:24
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"I'm the main person who can get the money so yes I'm sure!" Barry snapped.
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Old 23-07-2013, 10:24
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"You're staying here!" The man replied as he stood up

"Why??" Barry asked
"Isn't it obvious??? A mothers protection over her children will make her do anything"
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