Originally Posted by mazzieblue:
“i have to admit my biggest problem with this series was that the downward spiral came out of nowhere. One minute he's fine, organizing a wedding and patching up a man's jugular on his wedding night and the next his haemophobia is back and sending him into depression. Perhaps if he had gotten a phone call about his father's death, then it would have made more sense. It also would have made his meltdown when his mother arrived more believable.
E8 did alot to repair the damage - the triggers of his family leaving, his mother "coming clean" and Ruth's blunt honesty were enough to snap him out of the malaise and start taking action and I found this believable. But I still think the it made the middle episodes confusing and disconnected.”
In general, I agree with this. And because there is no obvious, or even really guess-able reason why things should change so drastically, so quickly, the efforts of the creative powers that be to frame (or "gin up" a plot development that will keep up the "will they - won't they" tension even though they have married, are a little more visible than they should be. The plot machinery creaks a little. I appreciate that their solution was ingenious, but it was too obviously a solution to a problem they felt they had.
Three minor areas where I might disagree: In the first episode, Martin's demeanor ranges from very thoughtful to, when glimpsed through the car window as he is arriving at the church, the demeanor of someone arriving at funeral. The trailer that appeared before the 1st episode, was rather downbeat. So, I think they started to prepare the ground even at that point.
Second, four months is probably long enough for at least some honeymoons to be over. Sharing his living space with another person(s) for the first time, in a space that is too small, etc., etc., all the things we have said over and over. I would guess that the adjustment was stressful, and the effects are cumulative.
Third, the beginning of the breakdown, as it was depicted, occurred as Louisa went back to her job ( I still don't understand how long her leave was, but never mind). She then became stressed and tense and more prone to fly off the handle,. This had to add to the stress, and often, stress does bad things to people's emotional/mental well-being.
I and many others can spin out, all day long, psychological theories as to what was happening with Martin. But the point is, that we are only shown
these particular stimuli, and his reaction does seem disproportionate, and only explainable in terms of a plot device, never a good thing,.