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Old 14-04-2014, 22:13
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ive had this thought in my head for a few days. I'll leave a little back story!

Barry Barry and Jack McAllister are dating and everyone is happy apart from Jack's dad who tried to split them up. He goes too far and runs jack over?? Anyway I'll start this off


"You do know I love you right babe?" Barry smiled as he walked into school with Jack.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:12
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"Of course! I love you too babe." Jack smiled.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:15
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Barry grinned and planted a kiss on Jack's lips.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:20
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Jack smiled and responded happily.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:26
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"Tonight's going to be fun! You can go home from mine tomorrow and your dad will have gone back to Edinburgh!" Barry beamed
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:28
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Jack laughed. "Yes that'll be great!"
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:31
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The boys walked into school and had a good laugh for the day.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:34
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They then met up to walk home.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:36
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The boys started walking in the direction of Barry's house. They soon ended up at a main road. "You would have to live on the other side of this wouldn't you!" Jack giggled as he checked the road and then stepped out
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:42
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Suddenly a car came siring right at him.
"JACK!!!!! WATCH OUT!!!!" Barry screamed.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:50
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Jack looked towards the car and didn't have any time to move. The car smacked right into him.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:51
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Jack fell to the ground unconscious. Barry ran to him. The car sped off.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:54
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Barry fell to his knees beside Jack's body. There was blood spilling from his head.
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Old 14-04-2014, 23:56
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Barry rang an ambulance. "Quick please!!! My boyfriend's been run over by a car!!" He cried.
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Old 15-04-2014, 00:00
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Barry gave the street name and then hung up. He picked Jack up and carried him to the pavement.
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Old 15-04-2014, 00:02
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"Jack!!!! Jack!!! Babe can you hear me???"
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Old 15-04-2014, 00:04
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Jack didn't respond.
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Old 15-04-2014, 00:09
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Barry broke down.

(Will continue tomorrow! )
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Old 15-04-2014, 00:12
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The ambulance arrived 10 minutes later and the paramedics examined jack while Barry explained everything again.
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Old 15-04-2014, 11:00
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They then took Jack to hospital.
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Old 15-04-2014, 12:22
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Barry text his mum as he was in the ambulance.

Mum, Jack's been hit by a car!! Please come to the hospital. I'm worried about him :'( x
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Old 15-04-2014, 12:24
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Carol met him at the hospital.
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Old 15-04-2014, 12:34
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She hugged Barry tight. "Where is he??"
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Old 15-04-2014, 12:35
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"In surgery." Barry cried. "The car just drove off!"
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Old 15-04-2014, 12:40
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Carol sighed sadly. "I'm sure jack will be fine soon"
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