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Too far?? (Waterloo Road RP)
ive had this thought in my head for a few days. I'll leave a little back story!
![]() Barry Barry and Jack McAllister are dating and everyone is happy apart from Jack's dad who tried to split them up. He goes too far and runs jack over?? Anyway I'll start this off ![]() "You do know I love you right babe?" Barry smiled as he walked into school with Jack. |
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"Of course! I love you too babe." Jack smiled.
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Barry grinned and planted a kiss on Jack's lips.
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Jack smiled and responded happily.
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"Tonight's going to be fun! You can go home from mine tomorrow and your dad will have gone back to Edinburgh!" Barry beamed
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Jack laughed. "Yes that'll be great!"
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The boys walked into school and had a good laugh for the day.
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They then met up to walk home.
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The boys started walking in the direction of Barry's house. They soon ended up at a main road. "You would have to live on the other side of this wouldn't you!" Jack giggled as he checked the road and then stepped out
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Suddenly a car came siring right at him.
"JACK!!!!! WATCH OUT!!!!" Barry screamed. |
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Jack looked towards the car and didn't have any time to move. The car smacked right into him.
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Jack fell to the ground unconscious. Barry ran to him. The car sped off.
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Barry fell to his knees beside Jack's body. There was blood spilling from his head.
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Barry rang an ambulance. "Quick please!!! My boyfriend's been run over by a car!!" He cried.
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Barry gave the street name and then hung up. He picked Jack up and carried him to the pavement.
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"Jack!!!! Jack!!! Babe can you hear me???"
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Jack didn't respond.
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Barry broke down.
(Will continue tomorrow! )
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The ambulance arrived 10 minutes later and the paramedics examined jack while Barry explained everything again.
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They then took Jack to hospital.
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Barry text his mum as he was in the ambulance.
Mum, Jack's been hit by a car!! Please come to the hospital. I'm worried about him :'( x |
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Carol met him at the hospital.
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She hugged Barry tight. "Where is he??"
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"In surgery." Barry cried. "The car just drove off!"
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Carol sighed sadly. "I'm sure jack will be fine soon"
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