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Old 22-04-2014, 00:50
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(This idea is based on what happened to Lucy Beale on Eastenders involving her death!)

Back story: Jack McAllister gets into an argument one night with his mum and storms off, never to be seen again, alive...


"I am 17 mum!!! I'm not a little kid anymore!! It's just a party!" Jack McAllister complained
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Old 22-04-2014, 00:52
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"You've got school tomorrow, Jack!" Olivia said.
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Old 22-04-2014, 00:54
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"So?? It's not like I'm going to drink anything!! I'll be home by 11!"
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Old 22-04-2014, 00:55
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"Jack, I said no!!"
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Old 22-04-2014, 00:58
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"Why are you always doing this??? I've let my friends down too many times in the past. I'm not letting them down today. Don't bother to wait up!!" Jack snapped before he stormed out of the house.
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Old 22-04-2014, 00:59
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"Jack!!!!!!"
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:02
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Jack ran away from the house.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:03
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Olivia sighed.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:07
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She was only looking out for Jack.

Meanwhile, Jack was walking towards the party which was being held at the school house.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:09
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He was excited about actually going.

(Will continue tomorrow! )
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:12
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Jack kept walking until he was almost there. Suddenly, he felt someone grab him from behind.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:13
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He didn't know what was happening.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:15
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The mystery person put jack over their shoulder and carried him off as he screamed for help.
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Old 22-04-2014, 01:16
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No one heard him though.

(Really going now! )
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Old 22-04-2014, 10:43
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The person carried jack all the way to the woods and then dropped him down on the floor.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:00
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"Who are you???" Jack said scared.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:07
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He never got a reply. The person pulled out a knife and stabbed jack in the stomach.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:08
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Jack screamed in agony and passed out.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:28
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The person stabbed jack a few more times until the teenager stirred to see the person pulling out his intestines. "N..no! P...please!" Jack sobbed
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:29
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The person ignored him.
"W..who a..are y..you???"
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:34
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"The last person you're ever going to see." The person replied coldly before they raised the knife and plunged it into Jack's right eye.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:35
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Jack passed out again.

Meanwhile, Olivia was getting worried as it was 11:30 already....
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:41
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Where was Jack?? He said he would be back by 11...

The person put their knife away and grabbed Jack's legs. They dragged the dying teenager deeper into the woods.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:42
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She decided to go to the schoolhouse where she knew the party was.

"P..please d..don't k..kill me....." A dying Jack begged. He wanted his mum.
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Old 22-04-2014, 11:47
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The person ignored Jack and simply walked off. Jack only lasted 10 minutes before he went limp, dying of blood loss.

Olivia got to the school house and went inside. She found Maggie. "Is Jack here??" She asked, not knowing her son had just died.
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