Hi guys, I'm just looking for some feedback on an original song. I'm in a metal band but we've tried to alter our sound to have more catchy elements, such as choruses that you can sing along to, stuff like that. I'm just wondering what you guys think of this and in your opinion, what could we do to make it better/what areas of songwriting should we focus more on. Thanks! http://youtu.be/aJHua2zHj00