Seriously. You say the EPs don't write quality stuff like Newman...how would you write this scene to engage the audience...
Challenge: Write a scene where Mick and Dean switch bodies
Originally Posted by tullochs:
“Seriously. You say the EPs don't write quality stuff like Newman...how would you write this scene to engage the audience...”
“Seriously. You say the EPs don't write quality stuff like Newman...how would you write this scene to engage the audience...”
What is it with you and switching bodies....??
Scene: queen vic bar interior
Mick: hi Dean
Dean: hi Mick
Mick: shall we switch bodies?
Dean: yeh ok then
Direction: Mick and Dean then switch bodies
Scene end
Mick: hi Dean
Dean: hi Mick
Mick: shall we switch bodies?
Dean: yeh ok then
Direction: Mick and Dean then switch bodies
Scene end
[interior of the boys toilet; the Vic. Dean and Mick stand in front of the mirror holding hands]
Dean and Mick [Together]: Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy!
[There is a rumble of thunder and a crack of lightning. The bathroom is plunged into darkness. Suddenly, a small figure appears, glowing softly and eerily. Dean and Mick cling to one another]
Small figure: Who has woken me from my slumber? Who has called forth The Bingo Queen of Hell?
[Dean pushes Mick forward]
Mick: P...Please, Bloody Peggy, we've summoned you in the hope of finding a way of defeating the evil, angry tomato man, Phil Mitchel.
Dean: We need your wisdom, Oh Bingo Queen of Hell!
[The specter observes them for a silent moment]
Specter: Your foolish quest is at an end, for you see...THE ANGRY TOMATO IS MY SON!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh nos!
Specter: For your impertinence, I hearby condemn you to a fate worse than death! You will switch bodies and Tullochs will masturbate for a while at the thought of it!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh god no! Not that! Anything but that!
Specter [begins to cast a powerful spell]: Bwahahaha! Nothing will save you! And by this time tomorrow Tullochs will already have made a new f**king thread about basically the same thing, where you will be tormented and masturbated over again! And again the day after! And again the day after! And so on, and so forth, until the end of time or until the mods ban his ass for repeatedly breaking the forum rules by remaking the same f**king thread again and again! Bwahahahahaha!
[Mick and Dean scream as the magic spell is woven around them; scene fades to black]
Dean and Mick [Together]: Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy!
[There is a rumble of thunder and a crack of lightning. The bathroom is plunged into darkness. Suddenly, a small figure appears, glowing softly and eerily. Dean and Mick cling to one another]
Small figure: Who has woken me from my slumber? Who has called forth The Bingo Queen of Hell?
[Dean pushes Mick forward]
Mick: P...Please, Bloody Peggy, we've summoned you in the hope of finding a way of defeating the evil, angry tomato man, Phil Mitchel.
Dean: We need your wisdom, Oh Bingo Queen of Hell!
[The specter observes them for a silent moment]
Specter: Your foolish quest is at an end, for you see...THE ANGRY TOMATO IS MY SON!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh nos!
Specter: For your impertinence, I hearby condemn you to a fate worse than death! You will switch bodies and Tullochs will masturbate for a while at the thought of it!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh god no! Not that! Anything but that!
Specter [begins to cast a powerful spell]: Bwahahaha! Nothing will save you! And by this time tomorrow Tullochs will already have made a new f**king thread about basically the same thing, where you will be tormented and masturbated over again! And again the day after! And again the day after! And so on, and so forth, until the end of time or until the mods ban his ass for repeatedly breaking the forum rules by remaking the same f**king thread again and again! Bwahahahahaha!
[Mick and Dean scream as the magic spell is woven around them; scene fades to black]
Originally Posted by iMatt_101:
“What is it with you and switching bodies....??”
“What is it with you and switching bodies....??
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It's borderline spam
Originally Posted by los.kav:
“[interior of the boys toilet; the Vic. Dean and Mick stand in front of the mirror holding hands]
Dean and Mick [Together]: Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy!
[There is a rumble of thunder and a crack of lightning. The bathroom is plunged into darkness. Suddenly, a small figure appears, glowing softly and eerily. Dean and Mick cling to one another]
Small figure: Who has woken me from my slumber? Who has called forth The Bingo Queen of Hell?
[Dean pushes Mick forward]
Mick: P...Please, Bloody Peggy, we've summoned you in the hope of finding a way of defeating the evil, angry tomato man, Phil Mitchel.
Dean: We need your wisdom, Oh Bingo Queen of Hell!
[The specter observes them for a silent moment]
Specter: Your foolish quest is at an end, for you see...THE ANGRY TOMATO IS MY SON!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh nos!
Specter: For your impertinence, I hearby condemn you to a fate worse than death! You will switch bodies and Tullochs will masturbate for a while at the thought of it!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh god no! Not that! Anything but that!
Specter [begins to cast a powerful spell]: Bwahahaha! Nothing will save you! And by this time tomorrow Tullochs will already have made a new f**king thread about basically the same thing, where you will be tormented and masturbated over again! And again the day after! And again the day after! And so on, and so forth, until the end of time or until the mods ban his ass for repeatedly breaking the forum rules by remaking the same f**king thread again and again! Bwahahahahaha!
[Mick and Dean scream as the magic spell is woven around them; scene fades to black]”
“[interior of the boys toilet; the Vic. Dean and Mick stand in front of the mirror holding hands]
Dean and Mick [Together]: Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy! Bloody Peggy!
[There is a rumble of thunder and a crack of lightning. The bathroom is plunged into darkness. Suddenly, a small figure appears, glowing softly and eerily. Dean and Mick cling to one another]
Small figure: Who has woken me from my slumber? Who has called forth The Bingo Queen of Hell?
[Dean pushes Mick forward]
Mick: P...Please, Bloody Peggy, we've summoned you in the hope of finding a way of defeating the evil, angry tomato man, Phil Mitchel.
Dean: We need your wisdom, Oh Bingo Queen of Hell!
[The specter observes them for a silent moment]
Specter: Your foolish quest is at an end, for you see...THE ANGRY TOMATO IS MY SON!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh nos!
Specter: For your impertinence, I hearby condemn you to a fate worse than death! You will switch bodies and Tullochs will masturbate for a while at the thought of it!
Dean and Mick [together]: Oh god no! Not that! Anything but that!
Specter [begins to cast a powerful spell]: Bwahahaha! Nothing will save you! And by this time tomorrow Tullochs will already have made a new f**king thread about basically the same thing, where you will be tormented and masturbated over again! And again the day after! And again the day after! And so on, and so forth, until the end of time or until the mods ban his ass for repeatedly breaking the forum rules by remaking the same f**king thread again and again! Bwahahahahaha!
[Mick and Dean scream as the magic spell is woven around them; scene fades to black]”
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