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Rewriting the John Stape storyline Part 2
George_Rose
21-08-2014
I really hope that you lot enjoyed the first part of My rewritten version of the John Stape story Arc, now here is Part 2, and I promise you this, it will have a lot of twists and turns, and I guarantee that you will enjoy it.

Stefan continues to stare at an horrified John, whilst Peter is still talking to Leanne on the phone. A naive Peter then ends his phone call with Leanne and asks who Stefan is. Stefan lies and says that he's a doctor and that he has come to check on John and see how he's doing. Much to John's horror. Peter then says goodbye to John and then leaves the room and the hospital.

Stefan then takes the oppintunity to wind John up, saying that he knows where he lives and that he's not safe anymore. John then bites back, saying that he'll blow the whistle on Stefan and his Dodgy dealings if he doesn't leave him alone. Stefan then informs John that if he dares to disrespect him, then his friends and family will get very badly hurt, and that it would all John's fault. He then gives John a firm warning, and then leaves the hospital knowing full well that he has John under his thumb for now at least.

John is then discharged from hospital and as Fiz is busy at work, Ken goes along to pick him up. Ken asks John what he thinks caused the panic attack, and John lies to Ken by saying that it was most probably due to stress. Ken believes him, and he then takes John back to his and Deirdre's house for a cup of tea.

Meanwhile Leanne is in the rovers having a drink with Janice when Kieran walks in, and Leanne then asks Kieran how his trip to the Cafe downtown with Peter went. Kieran doesn't know what Leanne's talking about, and at that very moment Leanne realises that Peter's been lying to her face. She then storms over back to the Bookies to confront him, and he then confesses that he was at the hospital with John whilst he was recovering from his Panic Attack. Enraged, Leanne shouts at Peter, accusing him of lying when he promised that there would be no more lies between them. Peter shouts back by accusing her of having a vendetta against John ever since he arrived on the street, and says that he can't understand why because she won't tell him. Leanne then storms off, leaving Peter fuming because she won't tell him about her past with John.

John then tells Ken, Deirdre and Blanche about Leanne's problem with him, lying to them that she doesn't have a clue who she is at all. Blanche seems a little bit suspicious however, and tells him that she thinks that he's got something to hide. Deirdre tells her mother to shut up and stop picking on John. And then there's a knock at the door.

Deirdre opens the door to find a Loan Shark called Ross Bellamy at her front door,and he barges in to confront John. Ross accuses John of owing him £2,000 in cash, whilst John denies it completely. Ross also confesses that Stefan informed him of where John was supposedly hiding, and that he's come to take John out once and for all. Ken threatens to call the Police, but Ross isn't intimidated one little bit, and suddenly lashes out at John.

Ken eventually throws Ross out the house, and at this point John feels very scared & anxious that Stefan is out to get him, Deirdre then confronts him and tells him not to worry about the shoe thing as in her words, "It's all a storm in a tea-cup".

Peter then arrives at the house along with Simon and finds John there. He moans to Ken and Deirdre about Leanne's supposed obsession with John, and that he feels like it's driving a wedge between them. John offers to quit the Bookies, but Peter tells him not to, because he believes that if he was to quit, it could cause further problems between him and Leanne.

Stefan is then seen in his office overlooking the Salford Quays, when Leanne suddenly walks in, she tells him that she figured out where his Office was, and that she is happy to share some dirty and horrible information on John for money. She demands 64,000 for it, which Stefan agrees to give her. He then writes out a check and gives it to her, but we cut away just as she's about tell Stefan everything.

John tells Fiz about Ross Bellamy, and she is speechless to say the least, she suggests that they flee Weather-Field in order to get away from him. But John refuses the idea, saying that he can stand up to Bellamy himself.

Suddenly, Fiz's telephone and she picks up the phone to find Stefan on the other line, the speaker is on loud, and John is horrified and scared that Stefan coud possibly hurt Fiz. He asks to speak to John, and John turns off the speaker on the phone and tells Stefan that he doesn't intimidate him one little bit, but John's face then turns to Horror as Stefan says that Leanne told him his big secret, and that he wants 32,000 in order to keep quiet and not tell Fiz or anyone else. John says that he cannot do this to him, but Stefan replies that he can do what he likes, as he's the kingpin of Manchester. John then hangs up on him and stares at the wall, scared at what's going to happen next.

To be Continued...
DS Forum Support
21-08-2014
Feep the fan fictions to the Soaps Games forum, please.
George_Rose
22-08-2014
Sorry, my Apologies.
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