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Old 27-08-2014, 09:52
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a journey to a school trip destination ends in disaster when the coach is involved in a serious crash. Injuring some of the students and staff.
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Old 27-08-2014, 09:55
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Old 27-08-2014, 09:59
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Today was the day of the school trip. The coach would be leaving at 10am
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Old 27-08-2014, 09:59
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Most students were looking forward to it
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:02
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Carol would be accompanying her kids to help Maggie out with the cooking at the campsite.
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:05
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Barry groaned at this.

Connor was looking forward to it but had woken up with a stomach ache
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:07
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It was nothing though. Just trapped wind.

Everyone started arriving at the school.
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:08
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They were all chatting happily though.

Jack had his travel sickness pills handy
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:10
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Barry put his earphones in. Imogen and Connor were sharing Connors earphones. Dynasty and Kevin were chatting.

The coach soon took off. They would be travelling for 5 hours.
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:27
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Jack was sitting near the front being very quiet.
Kasey was sat next to him.

Connor curled up on imogen
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:35
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Barry distanced himself from everyone else and sat at the back himself
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:37
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No one wanted to sit next to him.

'Jack you ok' kasey said to her secret boyfriend he was being unusually quite.

Imogen cuddled her boyfriend
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:43
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Jack nodded. I'm fine.

It was 2 hours into the journey, everyone was content all aware it was going to change any minute now.
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:45
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Connor, jack and a few other students were fast asleep
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:48
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Barry was dosing.

A car driving on the same road as the coach was driving in the wrong lane and crashed into the front of the coach. Causing a lorry and two other cars to slam into the back of the coach.
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Old 27-08-2014, 10:55
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The driver tried to sterve but went into another car
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Old 27-08-2014, 11:00
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Two cars at the front and two cars and a lorry had crashed into the back, where Barry had been sitting,
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Old 27-08-2014, 11:03
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The window had smashed by Barry.

Everyone had got woken up with a start.

The jolt made jack throw up everywhere including himself and kasey
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Old 27-08-2014, 11:13
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Simon had hit his head but was still conscious. He and Christine stood up immediately to check on everyone.

Imogen, dynasty, , kacey, Harley, scout, jack, Rhiannon and Darren all had minor injuries. Bumped heads, jolted necks etc

Barry meanwhile was lay at the back unconscious surrounded by smashed glass. Blood was everywhere.

Carol was relieved to see her girls were alright, nothing to serious. She then froze. "WHERES BARRY??"
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Old 27-08-2014, 11:42
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'Barry can you here me' Christine said
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Old 27-08-2014, 14:47
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There was no reply from Barry.

"Where was he sitting," Simon asked
"The back.." Carol mumbled Rushing up to the back of the bus.

Christine then spotted Connors eyes were shut.

Barry had took the full impact of the crash as the lorry had slammed right behind him.
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Old 27-08-2014, 14:59
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'Connor' Christine said loudly.

Simon checked on Barry.
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Old 27-08-2014, 17:56
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Carol found her son lying covered in smashed glass and blood "BARRY?"
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Old 27-08-2014, 18:21
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All of a sudden, another lorry went ploughing into the coach knocking it on it's side
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Old 27-08-2014, 21:47
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Everyone screamed.

Carol Simon and Christine fell to the floor
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