Originally Posted by Anya D:
“It didn't help that you could see the block of ice in his hand before the reveal and the curtain billowed up slightly so you could see the bottom of the helicopter.
He seems a nice enough chap, but I don't find him very dynamic, which is a problem when your tricks involve the participation of other people. There is no energy emanating from him for anyone else to feed off.
I don't think he made it clear what was required from the judges with his "tell me what word you're thinking of...", when he really meant "what word was on the card?".
Didn't help that the dipshit judges kept asking what he wanted them to do.
It was a mess, imo.”
Yes the first rule of magic is to be clear in what you want the spectator to do or else they are very likely to do anything instead of what you want. Audience management is rule 101 of any magic act.
As it wasn't a mind reading routine, he didn't need to use the word "mind" at all - The premise was that they had freely selected one in 52 cards with a random item on it.
"Ok David, now for the first time, read out aloud the item on your card that you selected" - Clear, clean, precise. The audience member is left in no doubt as to what it is you want them to do and the words reinforce what is meant to have happened.
The whole routine was messy from a magicians point of view as the premise wasn't clear at all. Was he trying to present it as a mentalist prediction: IE 'You randomly selected some cards and I have predicted what those cards would be' OR 'Whatever randomly selected cards you have picked, I can make them magically appear. ? - I think as he goes out as a magician and not a mentalist, the second premise is what he was aiming for, but it all wasn't clear along with his patter (Dialogue).