Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“Firstly, thank you for writing an essay longer than my usual ones... :P”
No problem, long messages are apparently a specialty of mine
Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“Danny Pink points: the Danny Pink storyline was doomed from the start because the audience didn't want it to play out. A lot of people took against him because of his 'unlikable' traits and therefore didn't want to invest in his storyline. This is a problem if you want to try a serious storyline but your audience wants instant gratification. They want to boo someone or cheer someone... everyone has to be a good guy or a bad guy. Danny Pink was too ambiguous. As you say, he had his own thoughts, his own character, his own viewpoint. He didn't acquiesce to the Doctor's viewpoint or even necessarily Clara's. Basically he was an actual character, not a clear cut hero or villain. And apparently the audience didn't like that. I liked that the Doctor, Clara and Danny all had their own perspective and none of them was presented as the right one. That doesn't sound terribly Earth-shattering but for Doctor Who it was a pretty different approach to characterization. Let's be honest: the show is usually pretty simplistic.
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The characters don't need to see that irony for the story to have a pay-off. That's actually rather unsubtle. Of course, all of this only works if the audience wants to invest in the storyline anyway and they decided early that they didn't in a lot of cases. We'll have to agree to disagree whether this is Moffat's fault. He's writing a broad, mainstream show for a broad, mainstream audience very used to being served up familiar tropes and easily readable characters, rather than inscrutable ones like Pink.”
On the issue of people not wanting the storyline to play out, or being prejudgemental of Danny Pink as a character, I agree with you. As soon as a recurring or lead character becomes the slightest bit ambigous people condemn it - the same can be said for some extent for the Twelfth Doctor. He was never ambiguous to the extent of you wondering if he was the hero, but many people resented the "am I a good man" stuff very quickly and didn't want to see it play out. A great shame that people aren't willing to invest or go on that journey (maybe the same where Colin Baker's Doctor was concerned?), especially when I didn't even consider the Twelfth Doctor to be unlikeable at any point. A bit grumpy, a bit snide around the edges at worst... but it fed into his character and felt much more multi-faceted than what we'd had before. I can even say that about Danny Pink to start with - I didn't dislike him straight away. I didn't much like him either, and tend to start on neutral ground but his contribution to
Into the Dalek was relatively inoffensive. My later dislike is something that grew from the journey I was happy to see unfold, but ultimately dissatisfied with.
You're right that he wasn't presented as a hero or a villain, but rather a person. And you're right that he had his own perspective, as did the Doctor and Clara...and it was wonderfully realised that these were three very conflicting personalities. I enjoyed that, I won't deny it that the dynamic itself was fresh to an extent (admittedly I'd like a Mickey/Rory/Danny that doesn't seem to have a problem with the Doctor because of the women that he associates with) and it rose above the more simplistic approach that I agree the show usually has. My problem is that I disagree that there was sufficient pay-off with it all. We saw The Doctor and Clara have a massive blow-out in
Kill the Moon, and it wasn't resolved that week. In fact we spent most of the following accept deliberately not resolving it either, but skirting around it as a delicate subject. Neither the Doctor or Clara were ever shown to be 'right', and it was never used as leverage against the other. It wasn't the approach I expected, but it was fantastic! It nicely complimented
Mummy on the Orient Express rather than being a massive full-blown drama all its own, and proved you don't need a tidy resolution where they reach mutual understanding. Moffat did do that...for The Doctor and Clara. We wrap it up as Clara having a "wobble, a big wobble" but it was overcome. They continued to have an occasionally friction-fraught friendship for the rest of the series and it wasn't dropped... many hated it (the oh so original Clara Who comments, just like Amy Who, Donna Who, Martha Who and Rose Who before it) but I did enjoy that a lot. And it afforded Series 9 the chance to have a much more casual friendship now that the drama and character had been invested in (I feel
The Magician's Apprentice was too big a leap in sudden niceness for The Doctor, but apart from that it's been done well). But Danny Pink didn't work for me. It didn't need mutual understanding at the end, but it needed more than it was afforded in
Death in Heaven. It painted Danny as a hero, getting away with criticising the Doctor without any intervention from the Doctor or Clara (the latter perhaps understandable). Saving the child was a heroic act, and it should have been what made me like the character in the end, and to ultimately see him as a hero. But it jumped the gun too early, and painted a one-sided argument with him prematurely, not letting the Doctor fight his own corner. After a series build up of resentment towards 'officer' Doctor, in a series that spends its entire time asking whether he's a good man, it felt like a let down. The only time it's addressed is when the Doctor mentions to Missy that he's not an officer... but that's entirely in service of Missy's plot, not Danny's. In the end he felt a pale imitation of a character that could have been a lot more... what I felt I got, and it's only personal opinion but I went in with an open-mind, was a character who resented the hero I like despite me knowing more about this hero than he does, and the show never feeling inclined to argue back on that occasion - despite doing so successfully with Clara in the same series.
Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“Moffat tries. I don't ask more of him than that. And when he's tried to do something a bit weightier it generally hasn't received strong audience acclaim. I'm not saying I think he's done everything right (I more or less agree with you about Season 6 for example) but I'm sympathetic of the job he has in balancing trying to do something interesting and challenging whilst simultaneously pandering to the mainstream audience.
I 'forgave' him Day of the Doctor for that very reason. It was an impossible job writing the anniversary. I didn't like the portrayal of the Time War; I didn't really buy into the War Doctor idea but Moffat had about a million requirements with that script.”
Don't get me wrong, full credit to the man where it's due that he tried new things. And he has a rather thankless job that many fail to realise, and he's clearly a fan of the show and genuinely tries to do right by it. More or less, I cannot even try to argue that he doesn't get more right than he does wrong - or else I wouldn't be on a forum talking about the show after six years of him as showrunner.
And more or less I forgive the things he does that come across as missteps. If I didn't, I'd be droning on and on (as some do) about what they dislike and how they wish it were done as RTD would have done it, or whatever. As an example, Mels is a horrendous character concept... dropped in out of the blue without even a hint or a reference to her previously, and we're to accept that she's a lifetime friend of Amy and Rory who later turns out to rather conveniently be River Song as well. In terms of concepts...that is genuinely horrendous, to the extent you wonder how it ever was deemed acceptable. But even then,
Lets Kill Hitler, despite being the only ever episode with Mels in it, is an episode I love. I can forgive that as so much else is done right for me. Not even the Tesselecta which would go on to tarnish this Series 6 arc further could taint the fact I enjoyed the episode...it was a fun way to bring the show back to screens, it had emotional scenes that weren't outright gushing, the whole thing
looked superb, and unlike the episode before it it made the right move to more-or-less stay in the same location for more than a few minutes, with a smaller cast of characters to focus on. I can forgive all of that because the episode on its own did things right, and in the grander scheme of things it's inconsequential... how often are those events referenced again?
The Day of the Doctor was different though. And regardless of being a script that was impossible to get right, it nonetheless made the active choice of altering a significant part of the show - in a way that also retrospectively makes you see all that came before it in a different light as well. That is a tremendous gamble to take...and not one that paid off for me. It cheapened the sense of consequence, and is an awful lot harder for me to dismiss or 'forgive' because it involves a concept that is referred to quite frequently, and even more so in episodes I may rewatch. It doesn't afford me a fresh new perspective where I feel I understand anything more than I did either, it affords me a perspective of knowing that I know better than the Doctor... that his big nonsensical secret is even more nonsensical now because he never did the thing he thought he did. I do my best to get on with that, to the extent I keep an open-mind about what a Gallifrey story may be about. But it's a hell of a lot harder to 'forgive' than anything else because it messes with a fundamental element of the show that may be referenced or relevant in absolutely any episode.
Beyond that I never felt a multi-Doctor story was particularly inspired for a show that could go anywhere in time and space and had done multi-Doctor stories before, I found the Zygon story to be dull and the Queen Elizabeth scenes to be a true waste of a fantastic historical figure (to an extent that future appearances of the character would struggle to recover what this one did). These are admittedly personal gripes and I don't hold Moffat accountable for not meeting my every personal demand...everyone has episodes they don't like, and anniversary status or not this was just as likely a candidate as any. But it was the game-changing elements that bothered me, personally, and they inflicted Moffat's tendency to rewrite history with huge flexibily onto a major emotional crux of the show.
Originally Posted by
Tom Tit:
“Osgood points: If Osgood had been a character with a lot of characterization and invested emotional weight behind her then it would have been cheap to kill her off for dramatic effect in Death in Heaven. But she really wasn't and so I think she was fair game.
Should Moffat bring her back because she was popular? ideally, no. Would I have brought her back? I'd like to think not but then that's easy for me to say sitting here when my job isn't affected by people online who hate me so that would be a rather untested creed to claim it.
He had a pretty good way of doing it (Zygon Osgood) so he did it. Personally I don't like it but I'm understanding of it. Let's not imagine it's all Moffat's decision to make either. The BBC has recently been promoting the character rather heavily. Check out her presence here for example: http://www.bbc.co.uk/blogs/doctorwho...4-2721c58e0255 Now, I don't think anyone 'forced' Moffat to bring her back but I can also quite easily imagine it was a popular idea that was put to him. Doctor Who is a commercial brand and creative decisions are not only made for creative reasons. Again, I doubt Osgood's return was pushed on Moffat, but pretty clearly it would be tempting from a commercial viewpoint. It's not fair to analyze Doctor Who like a novel or an independant film. As executive producer Moffat has to be concerned with the mass audience. As much as I agree in principle that the author should dictate to the audience, that is not Moffat's job. His job is to deliver a popular show that will sell in commercial markets.
It's easy to criticize him, a lot harder to actually try and understand the difficulty of the creative process in the circumstances of the Doctor Who showrunner. I think he gets in the level of sophistication he can, whilst pandering to the extent he feels necessary. It's a balancing act. Who can really judge where the parameters should be? I will say that I think RTD had a better sense of that than Moffat. In fact, that is his principle genius: populist writing that is not totally compromised. Moffat hasn't quite got a season right in that sense. It's either been too lightweight or alienated too much of the audience.”
I agree with more or less all of this, and even when I can say that I can place Series 9 in my personal top three (with Series 1 and 4) it's hard to deny that Moffat has struggled to get a series right in terms of that sophistication/pandering balance.
I've never accused him personally of messing with things such as the structure of the show. Too many two-parters, too many standalones, too short episodes... that kind of thing is surely something he discusses with other people as well in terms of producing a commercial product that has to be acceptable for broadcast. In situations like that I'll criticise the series as a whole (Series 6... having a two-part arc-heavy opener, a two-part mid-series arc story, and then a one-part finale that tried to chuck in its own tangent too) and only namedrop Moffat where I feel the writing played its part (again, Series 6 finale... did it need to add a 'broken universe' tangent or could the story have been resolved in a more direct, more substance-over-style way?). If those standalone stories all have rushed endings, as was the case with most of Series 7 then I'll complain about the writing (Moffat included, given he is meant to oversee the scripts and shares in the credit for a story well done...from me at least). Beyond that though, I agree it's tricky ground to tread.
Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“At the end of the day I always revert to judging what's on screen. Strax was another character brought back from the dead, and I initially disliked the idea because I really liked his original death scene. But the character entertains me and that was the ultimate justification.”
Strax is another example of how I hate some of the decisions Moffat makes, but I do my best to simply move on from it - or else you'll never enjoy the show. With that in mind, we hold similar opinions. I find Strax quite funny (although it's been a couple of series, basically, since we've seen him now...and I'm unsure how I feel about the sudden dropping of them) and I enjoy stories he's involved with...at the same time we saw him die (and his resurrection wasn't even in-series) and so that particular episode is tainted because I feel cheated by it. I'll enjoy, say,
The Snowmen and
The Crimson Horror in which he later appears and think little of the fact he was dead, and then not. I'm not the kind to keep complaining two whole series later about the same issue, but at the same time if someone were to ask me about it then I'd say, yes, it's not particularly satisfying and I do hold the writer accountable for that. When people ask me whether I think Moffat's view of death in the show seems to cheapen the concept, it's an example I can cite to put my opinion across. Strax is a great character in my opinion, but how much more would I like him if I didn't have that small issue at one point with him?
Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“I think the reason for every storyline Moffat does is because he thinks it will be exciting. I don't think he focuses on it in a longer term sense. The Doctor appears to die? Great season opener. Who is River Song? Great mystery! Some of these things are storylines that cannot really pay off satisfyingly in a formulaic show like Doctor Who but I'm happy to be along for the ride mostly.River's damp squib reveal as Melody Pond doesn't detract from the mystery or excitement of her earlier appearances, for me. I'd rather Moffat was throwing the best ideas he can come up with into the show than holding back in fear of it being too ambitious (even though some of it ultimately proved to be).”
And to bring it full circle, this is where I think 'infantile' creeps in a little bit. It's great to have someone who opts for exciting rather than by-the-numbers by default (I worry that a Gatiss-led show would be very by-the-numbers), but equally simply going for a storyline because it's an exciting idea, doesn't also mean it's a good idea. And I'm clearly happy to still accept that, despite it's tendency to be hit-and-miss, because again I'm still watching without doubt after five Moffat-led series. But rather than feeling like a work of genius (and though DW is seldom genius as we've both agreed, Moffat's timey-wimey antics would give the impression the show has a smartness to it that it doesn't live up to) it feels more like a child playing with his toys out of his toy box.
He sets up a little Lego city, full of little Lego people, doing little Lego things...then BOOM THERE'S A DINOSAUR STOMPING AROUND SMASHING THINGS TO PIECES... and then A SPACESHIP crash lands nearby. No need to worry though, because Mr.Hero and his Plucky Young Friend are nearby and can save the day. The aliens march en masse to the Lego City and threaten to kill everyone. Mr.Hero has a plan though, but WAIT THE ALIENS KILL 'PLUCKY YOUNG FRIEND' and this makes Mr.Hero really sad and distracted. Some people in the city die, but there's a big fight and a 'Random Action Hero' appears and saves the day, because that's exciting and cool... but can't stick around because of reasons. Mr.Hero is fine now, and goes in and stops the aliens because they're actually really weak, and miraculously Plucky Young Friend never died at all...she was actually having a nap, lol... and then, oh yeah we had a STOMPING DINOSAUR...the police took care of that, those policeman we never actually saw or were even referenced before but never mind because this is so much fun!
And the thing is that it is genuinely very fun if you can enjoy it so in-the-moment. I'm not suggesting that the show should become a heavily serious continuity-ladden piece of drama that doesn't know how to let loose around the edges, but equally some consistency and fine-tuning that feels less like a kid with a toy box, and more like a passionate writer who can blend fun with drama as he goes is always nice. In many ways I feel that's why I've so enjoyed Series 9, and really quite enjoyed Series 8 as well... they're not perfect, but they seem to address the balance a bit more. To plant the seeds before telling us there's a plant... to have an involved plot that isn't so heavy on continuity that we're constantly back-pedalling.
Having Davros reappear in your first episode is an ambitious idea, and I love it. I can't say it necessarily paid off to have such a continuity-heavy idea to kick off a new series, but with "Moffat tries" in mind I do agree entirely, and whilst I wasn't the biggest fan of the opening episode, I loved the second and can at least see what was trying to be achieved. But hark back a few years and there are examples where the toy box analogy feels much more in line with what we were getting...and there's less trying there, there's less of a responsible writer in there, it's no-reigns fun and excitement that squanders ambitious ideas because all bets are off as to what could ever actually happen.