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Old 01-02-2016, 23:43
HugoLott
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Hey, I was wondering what people thought of a song that I created involving loops and some of my own creativity.

https://soundcloud.com/ollypop/roll-the-dice-intro

I would like to know some feedback please Good and bad
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Old 03-02-2016, 15:03
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hmm, I'd cut the 1st part in half, to around 15 secs, 30 secs before anything happens is a bit too long. Drum solo part sounded a little disjointed.

Other than that, given to the right people, I could see it used in an ad
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Old 03-02-2016, 22:42
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hmm, I'd cut the 1st part in half, to around 15 secs, 30 secs before anything happens is a bit too long. Drum solo part sounded a little disjointed.

Other than that, given to the right people, I could see it used in an ad
Thank you! I was debating whether I liked the intro as a long thing as it builds suspense or not.
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Old 04-02-2016, 14:51
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30 seconds is a long time in music, depending on your BPM it could be as many as 60 or 70 beats, that equates to a chorus (ish) or verse (ish) which is fine even as an instrumental, so long as something is happening. Unfortunately, yours is just an intro, it does need to be shorter.

Hope that makes sense.

In the meantime - here is some of mine
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