Originally Posted by Tom Tit:
“Deep Breath:
What exactly is wrong with it?”
I guess for me I just found it rather...dull. Padded, even. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely loved the deeper exploration of character going on. It was at this point that I felt Moffat turned things around a bit and wrote some more intriguing character stuff for one of the first times - Matt Smith was truly done a disservice on that front. I loved Capaldi almost immediately, far quicker than I liked either Tennant or Smith before him. I loved Clara, and I'd been liking her a lot more since the 50th anniversary. The villain was an intriguing but not overplayed callback to the robots from
The Girl in the Fireplace, the cameo from Missy held a sense of ongoing intrigue to it, and the supporting cast were decent enough.
But the sum of all these parts was significantly less impressive, and as a whole the episode felt rather lacking. The Paternoster Gang were as decent as ever, and the point seemed they were a familiar face whilst we got acquainted with a new Doctor, but they never felt as sufficiently relevant as other characters (Jackie, Wilf) who had fulfilled a similar role before, even if they were a bit more interesting than typical companion relatives in the suburbs. More to the point, as much as they're painted to be crucial allies they have subsequently not appeared again in Series 8, or Series 9 at all. Whilst I can't admit to actually missing them (telling of how impactful they are, maybe?) I equally feel retrospectively that the huge role they play here is one of convenience. They're in the story because it's convenient in a world which revolves around the Doctor - rather than because they've been sufficiently woven into the ongoing story. Also, with
The Snowmen, The Crimson Horror and to an extent
The Name of the Doctor also carrying the distinctly Victorian London vibe their inclusion worked against the concept of 'something new'.
The episode had other problems along the way too. Pacing-wise it just doesn't know what to do with itself. In the end it feels like a typical 45 minute plot padded with the admittedly good character work. Unfortunately Moffat isn't able to always sufficiently mesh the two together.
And in terms of convenience again, the giant dinosaur defies logic in so many ways. It's for the sake of a few "cool" shots despite the huge scientific inaccuracy. And whilst
Dinosaurs on a Spaceship also took liberties with the dinosaur accuracy, it managed to actually depict a T-Rex at a more appropriate size. More frustrating than all of this is just how obnoxious the script is about it though - going so far as to address the inaccuracy and to just write it off because it can. It was the lazy, style over substance writing Moffat was guilty of in much of Series 6 and Series 7, and seemed to carry over here a bit too.
It wasn't a horrendous episode by any stretch, but it has enough flaws along the way that when looked on collectively it stands out as a very mixed episode. A flawed episode is sometimes still very easy to love, but when it demands 75 minutes from you it suddenly gets that little bit harder to care, especially when other episodes in Series 8 could have used just a few more minutes each to prevent such rushed resolutions.