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Old 15-09-2016, 20:55
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Since Kim has vanished and could return anytime. Here's a story I written something I could've seen happen to Kim and why she disappeared.

Since Kim had a obsession with Joe and Grace maybe there were many others before her obsession with Grace happened, maybe Kim used someone to get to her target that person who loved Kim and get used by Kim has swear revenge on her is the one who kidnapped Kim to get her out of the way so she can steal Esther's heart from Kim and have Esther fall in love with her to make Kim suffer letting her Know Esther fallen in love with someone else.

A new lady comes to hollyoaks village named Amber Maria Sweets 25 years old. Buy’s a flat in the village and looking for a job. Esther needs help with her cafe leaves a help wanted aid on the window. Amber grabs the aid and introduces herself to Esther. Amber gives Esther her CV and gives Amber a trail. A week goes by business is blooming at Esther’s Magic Bean, Esther’s impressed by Amber’s work and hires her full time. Over the weeks Amber gives hints to Esther that she likes her but Esther still misses Kim and doesn’t want to date anyone. Frankie comes by a number of times to See how Esther is and notices Amber likes Esther. Frankie helps Amber go out on a date with Esther, goes to a nice place for dinner. Esther goes to have dinner with Frankie doesn’t know it’s date set up, Esther sees Amber looking so nice, Esther annoyed with Frankie but gets her have some fun she agrees. The more Esther learns about Amber and her time having dinner she’s having fun and taking a liking to Amber. When the dinner over Amber gives Esther a kiss about to leave Esther grabs Amber kisses her and it’s a passionate kiss putting a smile on Esther’s face. Amber drives somewhere opens the door and it’s Kim chanied up telling her she had a lovely date with Esther and everything going to plan. Amber the one who kidnapped Kim but why. In Amber’s spare time she goes to feed Kim and tells her about all her time with Esther. Weeks go by Esther having a lovely time with Amber they are going out with each other. A episode explaining Amber’s past with Kim, they were girlfriends but Kim used Amber to get closer to Amber’s older sister Jenny. Amber learning about Kim’s obsession with Emma and finding they sleept with each other.

Amber very angry Kim destroyed the love she had for Kim and used her to get closer to her sister. Amber kicks Kim out of the house, saying come near her or her sister again Kim will pay for it. Amber swears revenge against Kim one way or another reads the paper years later hears about Kim’s sister being a killer and the mess Kim got herself into seeing that as a chance for payback. Goes to hollyoaks village stalking Kim learning as much she can and finds out she has a girlfriend. Hearing they are getting married perfect time for Amber to grab Kim and make her move onto Esther when times is right. Esther tells Amber she loves her, hearing that from Esther, Amber starts to fall in love with Esther knowing now what she’s doing to Esther is wrong. Esther opens up to Amber about Kim telling her every crazy thing she did to Esther making Amber more mad with Kim doing all that to a innocent sweet lovely caring person like Esther. Also tells Amber all about the bullying she went throw, trying to take her own life, crazy Jade, her kidney and her old girlfriend Tilly dumping her even how Frankie treated her on her deathbed. Amber tells her she won’t let anything or anyone harm her ever again and will always be there for her and their love will last forever. Amber about to leave Esther says meet me back here later and Amber says she wont miss it. Amber goes to vent her anger on Kim shutting all the things Kim did to poor Esther using her to get to Grace, putting Esther and baby Curtis lives in danger nearly killing them, covering for maniac sister who tried to murder Esther and pretending to be in a coma to hear if Esther loves her and not Grace. Kim tells Amber what your doing to Esther is just as bad the things I did to Esther. Amber says to a shocked Kim she’s in love with Esther, going to tell Esther the truth and expect her punishment for her crimes but not telling anyone where Kim is by letting Kim die with no food or water.

Amber heads back to the village to tell the truth and expect her punishment. Amber sees the bedroom fulled with candles and flowers, Esther comes from behind Amber covering her, turns around sees how beautiful Esther is in the outfit she’s wearing. Esther kisses Amber, telling Amber your the one true love for me, my souldmate, you fulled with happiness, love for my heart and soul and put a smile on her face when they went on their first date. Amber kisses her back saying you full with love and joy I will always be here for you. They make love, Amber still feels guilty for hurting Esther with her awful lies, but feels happy she’s fulled a very special person with love despite lied and used Esther. Amber changes her mind about telling the truth and facing punishment she doesn’t want to lose Esther who’s fulled her with a special love then Kim ever did. Amber to get rid of Kim so she doesn’t escape and take Esther off her. Kim escapes heads right back to hollyoaks to expose her kidnapper. Amber gets back to where she’s holding Kim to kill her and sees she’s escaped rushes back to the village to stop Kim from getting to Esther. Kim gets to Esther shocked to see her again feels her she never left her and tells her about her past with Amber, she kidnapped her and was going to kill her. Esther says she doesn’t believe her calls her a lair and wants her to leave. Amber gone full crazy comes back fearing Esther knows the truth she attacks and fights Kim trying to kill her. Esther try’s to stop Amber but gets pushed aside, Kim nearly getting killed by Amber gets knocked out by Esther. Kim calls the police, Esther upset knowing everything about her crazy girlfriend lied to her, even fallen in love with Amber. Despite everything Amber has done to Esther she wants her to get help and get well. Kim asks Esther if there's a chance for them she says yes but wants to take it slowly to rediscover the love she had for Kim witch will take time.
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Old 18-09-2016, 23:05
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You certainly take an in-depth interest in characters to speculate on their future, and write stories like this. It is an intriguing plot twist in which Esther finds new love Amber, who turns out to be an ex-girlfriend of Kim's. You give a reason behind Kim's disappearance too.

When you introduced Amber as a 25-year old, I had a potential flashback to 1988 and a 25-year old Amber Rudd!
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Old 19-09-2016, 10:37
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You certainly take an in-depth interest in characters to speculate on their future, and write stories like this. It is an intriguing plot twist in which Esther finds new love Amber, who turns out to be an ex-girlfriend of Kim's. You give a reason behind Kim's disappearance too.

When you introduced Amber as a 25-year old, I had a potential flashback to 1988 and a 25-year old Amber Rudd!
Thank you Multimedia really happy you enjoyed the story Originally it was a short story days later I made it bigger glad I did sometimes longer story's sometimes can be better then short ones. When Kim vanished started thinking of reasons behind it something to do with this Billie character in jail who Jack was the policeman sent him there. Could Billie have sent someone to kidnap Esther but mistake Kim for Esther or just Kim cause she was in the wrong place and wrong time. Then I started thinking about Kim's obsessive nature with Joe and Grace, most of all could there of been many others Kim got obsessed with in the past before coming to hollyoaks village and going after Grace. If there allot more one of them would want payback on Kim for using them and destroying the love they felt for Kim.

Another thing just thought of for my story Amber now knowing about Esther's bullying if Maddie, Sinead Ruby and Bart were still around she make them pay for their cruelty, Diane for covering for Sineads bullying, Frankie's cold behaviour dueing the bullying and at the hosptail. Jenny turning her back on Esther and pretending to help later on. Tilly for cheating on Esther and leaving Esther for another lady. Seeing baby Curtis means allot to Esther if Amber had her she would kill Grace and the brothers so baby Curtis goes to Esther but Amber knows better if she did that killing Grace it would upset Esther allot losing her friend Grace that's something Amber doesn't want to do to Esther upsetting her. Most of all Amber not jealous of Grace unlike Kim is, Amber trusts Esther and jealousy is something Amber not into.

A new twist just made up now for the end of my story. Esther knocks Amber out, Kim's about to call the police but knocks Esther Kim out. Later on Amber wakes up in Esther's shoulders being hugged kissing Amber as well, asking her why I am not in jail and turns around Kim's all tied up can get lose. Esther says you changed me, made me fell love again, a smile on my face and I am not going to lose you to. You haven't hurt me cheated on, left me or tried to kill me, Tilly left me broke my heart and Kim's played with my good nature to much. Not letting any of that happen to me again, gonna help you get rid of Kim for good so she won't cause anymore trouble. Amber shocked with what she's done to Esther but feels happy Esther loves despite everything Amber put her throw and they get rid of Kim burrying her alive.

Esther says lets move far away to many painful memories of hollyoaks village. Amber says what about your family, most all your friend Grace and baby Curtis. Esther says my family will be fine, Grace and baby Curtis will always be with me, I am not Curtis mother Grace is and she's a great mother, right now all I want is to be with you forever, start a family, once we are gone lets get married and have a baby with each other. Amber so happy kisses Esther hugs her hold each other's hand and wake away into the night.
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:26
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Another ending for Kim. They bury Kim fr a few mins and dig her out. Esther tells get out of hollyoaks, don't tell anyone about this or Amber and never come back. Amber asks Esther you sure Kim won't tell and she says who would beileve the sister of a serial killer about anything. Kim shocked with Esther and runs away. Esther tells Amber lets leave hollyoaks, get married and have a baby with each other. They kiss and walk away into the night.
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:31
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Another ending for Kim. They bury Kim fr a few mins and dig her out. Esther tells get out of hollyoaks, don't tell anyone about this or Amber and never come back. Amber asks Esther you sure Kim won't tell and she says who would beileve the sister of a serial killer about anything. Kim shocked with Esther and runs away. Esther tells Amber lets leave hollyoaks, get married and have a baby with each other. They kiss and walk away into the night.
I suddenly think you want to matchmake Esther with this Amber character. I just didn't think you'd ever advocate a storyline leading to Esther's departure from Hollyoaks.
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:38
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I bet Eva is a Lesbian who has been seeing Kim to try and get information on Jack

Also she is happy to break up Esther as she is part of Jacks family
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:38
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I suddenly think you want to matchmake Esther with this Amber character. I just didn't think you'd ever advocate a storyline leading to Esther's departure from Hollyoaks.
I don't want Esther to leave just like to see Esther be given a much better story to keep her busy. If anything they should bring in Esther's mother.

Multimedia thanks for reading my thread hope you are enjoying it

Question witch of the 3 endings do you like better for my story.
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:42
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I bet Eva is a Lesbian who has been seeing Kim to try and get information on Jack

Also she is happy to break up Esther as she is part of Jacks family
Eva has of course broken into the Osborne's house and smashed their photo. Kim wondered whether anyone was at home just before she disappeared. Could Eva therefore have kidnapped Kim with a view to holding her ransom to get more information from Jack?
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Old 22-09-2016, 20:49
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Eva has of course broken into the Osborne's house and smashed their photo. Kim wondered whether anyone was at home just before she disappeared. Could Eva therefore have kidnapped Kim with a view to holding her ransom to get more information from Jack?
That would explain why Esther didn't find her at the address Jack give Esther, Eva got to her first and Eva picked up the paper where Kim is that Esther dropped witch she picked up and given back to Esther while turning up in the village.
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Old 22-09-2016, 21:09
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I bet Eva is a Lesbian who has been seeing Kim to try and get information on Jack

Also she is happy to break up Esther as she is part of Jacks family
Worse yet Eva gets Esther to move on from Kim, gets her with a new girlfriend to have Esther happy for a bit but it's a set up Eva pays the lady to date Esther and tells her when to break up with Esther when the time is right so Esther will come to Eva talk with her about things just to have Esther on her side.
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