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Old 21-01-2007, 14:57
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Please tell me what you think of this, thankyou! No horrible abuse!!!!!!

It's new years day and a taxi pulls up to the village, someone opens the door and walks up the stairs, Tony and Dom are enjoying a big fry up, Tina is throwing up in the bathroom because of the big night out with the McQueens.

(Tina is still being sick)

Dom: Are you ok, in there Tina?
Tina: Oh yeah Dom i'm ok
Dom: Really?
Tina: NO!! just go away will ya

(Knock at the door)

Tony: I'll get it, Mandy what do you want, you have aleady come for a divorce what more do you want?
Mandy: Oh nice too see you too, i actually came round so i can see what properties i want
Tony: eh?
Mandy: What you really thought that i was gonna let you have everything.

(Scene changes to Jake and Frankie)

Frankie: Well that's another year done
Jake: Yeah,
Frankie: You alright love, you seem a bit quiet?
Jake: Well what do you expect mum, me losing Charlie to that Burton kid, he doesn't have a clue on how to look after Charlie. He should be with me!!

(Scene changes back to the Hutchinsons)

Tony: So what properties do you want?
Mandy: Well i don't want Il Gnosh, cause it is your buisness, and..... (Mandy gets interrupted by Tony)
Tony: Everything is my buisness you were just a back up.
Mandy: Oh so if i was a back up, who helped you do the accounts, me and who helped you run the place, me. Shall i go on?
Tony: So what do you want
(Mandy opening her arms out...)
Mandy: This place!!
Tony: What??????????
Mandy: This is my home, i was the one that put a price on it, i'm the one with it's name on the document.
Tony: Yeah but you can't.
Mandy: Watch me...

(Scene changes to the Valentines, baby Charlie is crying)

Sonny: Ooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Shut that baby up
Justin: I'm trying, but it won't stop.
Sonny: Well make it stop
Justin: How?...
Sonny: Give it something to drink like whisky
Justin: Whisky?
Sonny: Yeah he's probably teeting
Justin: I think you mean teething
Sonny: Same thing, just give him something

(Scene changes to Dom and Tina)

Dom: You stopped being sick now?
Tina: Yeah i think so
Dom: Here have a nice fry up
(Tina starts to be sick again)
Dom: Tina, Tina what's up with you?

(Changes to Mandy and Tony)
Tony: So when do you wanna move in
Mandy: Oh probably tomorrow
Tony: Tomorrow?
Mandy: Yeah so you betta find some where local, we go on, off you go.
Tony: I'll just get my coat
Mandy: Don't hurry back...
(Tony has left, Mandy is left with a smirk on her face)

(Scene changes to The dog where Frankie is working, Jake comes down he stairs)

Frankie: Have you calmed down now?
Jake: Yea, mum i'm sorry it's just that i miss him so much
Frankie: I know son, me too.
Jake: I'm going out
Frankie: Were?
Jake: Somewhere to clear my head

(Jake walks out)
(Scene changes bak to the Hutchinsons)
Dom: So how have you been?
Mandy: Great, you
Dom: Yeah me too
(Tina has come out of the bathroom)
Dom: How are you know
Tina: Better, listen can we go in to town
Dom; Yeah sure, Erm Mand me and Tina are going into town wanna come?
Mandy: No it's ok you go have fun, i need to pick out some room details
Dom: Ok, see ya later
Mandy: Bye

(Scene changes to the Valentines)
(Calvin and Louise are walking down the stairs and they see Sonny and Justin given baby Charlie a bit of whisky)
Calvin: Oi!! What you doing
Sonny: Check it out bruv, the baby is havin' a drink
Calvin: You can't do that
Justin: He's teething
Calvin: I don't care, just go out buy him a teething ring
Sonny: A what?
Louise: A teething ring, you know like a dummy but you freeze it and you give it to the baby to suck on to nomb the pain
Sonny: Hey, i'm not the dat, J you get it
Justin: I'm not gettin' it
Louise: Alright... I'll go

(Scene changes to Tony walking and he see's Jake)
Tony: Hey Jake, you alright?
Jake: Yeah, you?
Tony: Not really, Mandy's back she wants the flat
Jake: What?
Tony: Yep, she wants me out as soon as...
Jake: Blimey!!

(Scene changes to Mandy and there is a knock on the door)
Mandy: Alright, Luke!!!
Luke: Hiya Mand, how you been?

(Scene changes to the Valentines)
Louise: Right here one teething ring
Justin: Cheers
Sonny: Will it shut up now?
Calvin: Oi you were like that once
Sonny: Me, nah never

(Scene changes to Jake and Tony)
Tony: I mean what my gonna do, Dom can move in with Tina and i am stuck no where
Jake: Come and live with me!
Tony: What?
Jake: Well Darren's left, Steph's gone to travel the world, so why not
Tony: Oh cheers

(Scene changes to Mandy and Luke)
Mandy: So how have you been?
Luke: Yeah fine, i came back here cause i heard about Max
Mandy: What who told you
Luke: OB
Mandy: I should o've known
Luke: So you with anyone
Mandy: Well i've just divorced Tony
Luke: What?
Mandy: You heard
Luke: So your single then?
Mandy: That makes to of us
(They move in for a kiss, then Tony comes in)
Tony: Luke?
Luke: You alright
Tony: What you doing here?
Mandy: He came to see me, you found somewere yet?
Tony: Yeah i have
Mandy: Oh yeah where?
Tony: The dog, with Jake
Mandy: With Jake?, is there something your not telling me?
Tony: Like you care i'm gonna pack my things
Mandy: Yeah get every last bit, cause you ain't comin' back into my house
Luke: Mandy
Mandy: What?
Luke: Just give a little bit more time
Mandy: No i won't.

(Scene changes to Tina and Dom having Lunch)
Dom: So, what's up with you lately?
Tina: What do you mean?
Dom: You've been off with me lately
Tina: No reason, it's just
Dom: What?
Tina: I'm pregnant!!!
Dom: Your what?
Tina: I'm havin a baby

(Scene changes to Mandy, Tony and Luke)
Tony: Well that's the rest of my things
Mandy: You sure?
Tony: Yeah
Mandy: Well go on, off you go
Tony: Bye
Luke: See ya mate
Mandy: Oh and one more thing, happy new year
Tony: You too, but guess what?
Mandy: What?
Tony: I'm glad i'm leaving, i don't have to see you slag face
Mandy: Get out!
Tony: I felt sorry for Grace, you didn't want to know her and before you knew it, BAM!!!! to late
Mandy: Just get out of my house, now or i will phone the police.
Tony: Ok, see ya

(Scene changes to the Valentines)
Sonny: Ere mate check these
Justin: Ssshhh, he's asleep
Sonny: Alright well i'm goin out, wanna come
Justin: No i'm too tired
Sonny: Suit yourself
(Justin talking to Charlie)
Justin: It's ok, daddy's here, i'm not lettin you go

(Scene changes to the dog, upstair, where Tony and Jake are)
Tony: Cheers for this Jake
Jake: No problem
Tony: Night mate
Jake: Yeah night

(Scene changes to Mandy and Luke)
Luke: So where were we
Mandy: I think i know where
(She kisses him)
Luke: Good to be back
Mandy: Yeah good to be back!!

(She leads him to the bedroom!)


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Old 21-01-2007, 17:42
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Why would Justin and Sonny still be there in 2008?
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Old 21-01-2007, 17:45
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And why would Mandy be so nasty Tony?? And is OB in touch with Luke????
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Old 21-01-2007, 17:50
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It's kind of good, I didn't get some of the scenes and they were a bit abrut but as it's not real it's kinda good. why is Mandy a bitch now and why has no-ones relationships moved on.
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