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My script for hollyoaks, the new year 2008!! |
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My script for hollyoaks, the new year 2008!!
Please tell me what you think of this, thankyou! No horrible abuse!!!!!!
It's new years day and a taxi pulls up to the village, someone opens the door and walks up the stairs, Tony and Dom are enjoying a big fry up, Tina is throwing up in the bathroom because of the big night out with the McQueens. (Tina is still being sick) Dom: Are you ok, in there Tina? Tina: Oh yeah Dom i'm ok Dom: Really? Tina: NO!! just go away will ya (Knock at the door) Tony: I'll get it, Mandy what do you want, you have aleady come for a divorce what more do you want? Mandy: Oh nice too see you too, i actually came round so i can see what properties i want Tony: eh? Mandy: What you really thought that i was gonna let you have everything. (Scene changes to Jake and Frankie) Frankie: Well that's another year done Jake: Yeah, Frankie: You alright love, you seem a bit quiet? Jake: Well what do you expect mum, me losing Charlie to that Burton kid, he doesn't have a clue on how to look after Charlie. He should be with me!! (Scene changes back to the Hutchinsons) Tony: So what properties do you want? Mandy: Well i don't want Il Gnosh, cause it is your buisness, and..... (Mandy gets interrupted by Tony) Tony: Everything is my buisness you were just a back up. Mandy: Oh so if i was a back up, who helped you do the accounts, me and who helped you run the place, me. Shall i go on? Tony: So what do you want (Mandy opening her arms out...) Mandy: This place!! Tony: What?????????? Mandy: This is my home, i was the one that put a price on it, i'm the one with it's name on the document. Tony: Yeah but you can't. Mandy: Watch me... (Scene changes to the Valentines, baby Charlie is crying) Sonny: Ooohhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! Shut that baby up Justin: I'm trying, but it won't stop. Sonny: Well make it stop Justin: How?... Sonny: Give it something to drink like whisky Justin: Whisky? Sonny: Yeah he's probably teeting Justin: I think you mean teething Sonny: Same thing, just give him something (Scene changes to Dom and Tina) Dom: You stopped being sick now? Tina: Yeah i think so Dom: Here have a nice fry up (Tina starts to be sick again) Dom: Tina, Tina what's up with you? (Changes to Mandy and Tony) Tony: So when do you wanna move in Mandy: Oh probably tomorrow Tony: Tomorrow? Mandy: Yeah so you betta find some where local, we go on, off you go. Tony: I'll just get my coat Mandy: Don't hurry back... (Tony has left, Mandy is left with a smirk on her face) (Scene changes to The dog where Frankie is working, Jake comes down he stairs) Frankie: Have you calmed down now? Jake: Yea, mum i'm sorry it's just that i miss him so much Frankie: I know son, me too. Jake: I'm going out Frankie: Were? Jake: Somewhere to clear my head (Jake walks out) (Scene changes bak to the Hutchinsons) Dom: So how have you been? Mandy: Great, you Dom: Yeah me too (Tina has come out of the bathroom) Dom: How are you know Tina: Better, listen can we go in to town Dom; Yeah sure, Erm Mand me and Tina are going into town wanna come? Mandy: No it's ok you go have fun, i need to pick out some room details Dom: Ok, see ya later Mandy: Bye (Scene changes to the Valentines) (Calvin and Louise are walking down the stairs and they see Sonny and Justin given baby Charlie a bit of whisky) Calvin: Oi!! What you doing Sonny: Check it out bruv, the baby is havin' a drink Calvin: You can't do that Justin: He's teething Calvin: I don't care, just go out buy him a teething ring Sonny: A what? Louise: A teething ring, you know like a dummy but you freeze it and you give it to the baby to suck on to nomb the pain Sonny: Hey, i'm not the dat, J you get it Justin: I'm not gettin' it Louise: Alright... I'll go (Scene changes to Tony walking and he see's Jake) Tony: Hey Jake, you alright? Jake: Yeah, you? Tony: Not really, Mandy's back she wants the flat Jake: What? Tony: Yep, she wants me out as soon as... Jake: Blimey!! (Scene changes to Mandy and there is a knock on the door) Mandy: Alright, Luke!!! Luke: Hiya Mand, how you been? (Scene changes to the Valentines) Louise: Right here one teething ring Justin: Cheers Sonny: Will it shut up now? Calvin: Oi you were like that once Sonny: Me, nah never (Scene changes to Jake and Tony) Tony: I mean what my gonna do, Dom can move in with Tina and i am stuck no where Jake: Come and live with me! Tony: What? Jake: Well Darren's left, Steph's gone to travel the world, so why not Tony: Oh cheers (Scene changes to Mandy and Luke) Mandy: So how have you been? Luke: Yeah fine, i came back here cause i heard about Max Mandy: What who told you Luke: OB Mandy: I should o've known Luke: So you with anyone Mandy: Well i've just divorced Tony Luke: What? Mandy: You heard Luke: So your single then? Mandy: That makes to of us (They move in for a kiss, then Tony comes in) Tony: Luke? Luke: You alright Tony: What you doing here? Mandy: He came to see me, you found somewere yet? Tony: Yeah i have Mandy: Oh yeah where? Tony: The dog, with Jake Mandy: With Jake?, is there something your not telling me? Tony: Like you care i'm gonna pack my things Mandy: Yeah get every last bit, cause you ain't comin' back into my house Luke: Mandy Mandy: What? Luke: Just give a little bit more time Mandy: No i won't. (Scene changes to Tina and Dom having Lunch) Dom: So, what's up with you lately? Tina: What do you mean? Dom: You've been off with me lately Tina: No reason, it's just Dom: What? Tina: I'm pregnant!!! Dom: Your what? Tina: I'm havin a baby (Scene changes to Mandy, Tony and Luke) Tony: Well that's the rest of my things Mandy: You sure? Tony: Yeah Mandy: Well go on, off you go Tony: Bye Luke: See ya mate Mandy: Oh and one more thing, happy new year Tony: You too, but guess what? Mandy: What? Tony: I'm glad i'm leaving, i don't have to see you slag face Mandy: Get out! Tony: I felt sorry for Grace, you didn't want to know her and before you knew it, BAM!!!! to late Mandy: Just get out of my house, now or i will phone the police. Tony: Ok, see ya (Scene changes to the Valentines) Sonny: Ere mate check these Justin: Ssshhh, he's asleep Sonny: Alright well i'm goin out, wanna come Justin: No i'm too tired Sonny: Suit yourself (Justin talking to Charlie) Justin: It's ok, daddy's here, i'm not lettin you go (Scene changes to the dog, upstair, where Tony and Jake are) Tony: Cheers for this Jake Jake: No problem Tony: Night mate Jake: Yeah night (Scene changes to Mandy and Luke) Luke: So where were we Mandy: I think i know where (She kisses him) Luke: Good to be back Mandy: Yeah good to be back!! (She leads him to the bedroom!) Craeted by: Soapfan4lyf |
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Why would Justin and Sonny still be there in 2008?
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And why would Mandy be so nasty Tony?? And is OB in touch with Luke????
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It's kind of good, I didn't get some of the scenes and they were a bit abrut but as it's not real it's kinda good. why is Mandy a bitch now and why has no-ones relationships moved on.
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