Reg: what has happened here then

mr.rolf: well i was coming home from the shop and saw my next door neighbours door open and nobody in

reg: do you know if anyone was in when you was left

mr.rolf: well i could here screaming and shouting but presumed it was the family

reg: are they normally load

mr.rlf: yeah but the parents are vboth at work so it would of only of been there 15 year old daughter at home

reg: thanks we will contact you if we need any more info

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Bump!!

(at the station)

reg: kezia

kezia: yeah

reg; we are on this case and were wondering weather you would come and talk to the daughter with us

kezia: yeah cause

- Cuts to the supers office -

Supt Roberts is at his desk doing some paper work theres an knock on his office door.
Supt: come Smithy enters
Smithy: Sir, we just discovered other body on a waste ground
Supt: Do you know who is it yet?
Smithy: Yes sir, its DI Nixon Super roberts Dials his phone Jack come into my office now. DCI Meadows Enters the supers office
DCI Meadows: Sir
Supt: I just found out DI Nixons body been found Jack
DCI Meadows: oh god
Supt: i want any officers uniform or cid which have lost their warrent cards grounded until futher notice
Dic Meadows & Smithy: Sir

- Cuts to C I D -

can someone please post

Kezia: terry ive got the post morton results back

Terry: and......

Kezia: well like we thought he was murderd

Terry: was there any dna traces

Kezia: yeah but they sent that to the super

Terry: right ill go and see what the DNA suggestes

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In Sam's house
Phil went through the whole house searching for Sam there was no joy. He got his mobile out of his pocket and rang her mobile again. He heard the rining coming from her living room his heart did a backflip when he realised seh left it behind then it struck him, Sam always has her phone with her and hte door wasn't locked when he arrived whoever kidnapped her muct have taken her from here, it must also mean that there would be finger prints all over the place he got his mobile outt and rang into the station and explained to the super what had happened.
Last edited by crazy-amy : 14-04-2007 at 23:53

Hmm..

*** Can we have some continuity please *** On page one we established that the new superintendent was a woman. Yet, she (who was not given a name at the time) became a dave....

Lewis says : follow me ma'am.

.....

Oh I only read it as Dave sorry so is she a woman now-
Lets call her Mandy!

Wasnt the new supt a man? oh sorry my fault

I'm really confused now-seeing as we already have a scene with Dave it would be easer if we just kept him

so shall we just keep the new super named dave?

It would be simpler and less confusing yeah!
Anyway back to the game....

(cuts to supers office)

Super: Hi phil .......... yeah ....... so what are yousaying .................oh ok ill send someone down as quick as possible

(terry enters)

Terry: i heard you had the dna results from peter baxters body

Super: Yeah they could come in use actually ............ anyway get kezia and go down to sams house immediatly it looks like she was kidnapped from there so we could have dna

Terry: We will be there in a mo would it also be possible to send forensics down there if they are not already

Super: yeah cause infact do you mind if i come with you then i can sort it on the way

(both exit)
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(in cid)

Terry:Kezia get your coat with got to go to the DI's house

Kezia: what have you found out know

Terry: we will tell you on the way ... and by the way the super is coming with us

Kezia: Right .. ok then

(All exit)

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Terry: right kezia i take it you read all the notes

Kezia: yeah and something poped up

Super: like what

Kezia: well her mobile was used this morning

Terry: well thats weird because her phone is still at her place

Super: yeah thats why we are going down there to get traces of dna

Kezia: well anyway i traced the call and when it was used it was at her house

Super: so what your saying is either she was trying to warn someone or the kidnapper has been back and used it

Kezia: ezacly

(pull up outside sams house)

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Bump!!