Coronation street private eye is made up of the streets gossips
they have been hired by Steve to try and find out what is going on
and you can help
new storys will be released each month.
this Months is: whats Vernon up to
Vernon has been disappearin lately where to first we will track his movements...

Vernon Tomlin leaves Rovers at 19:34
leaves in a cab to Trafford centre at 19:45
spotted in Trafford Centre talking to a blond haired woman at 20:23
leaves in a streetcars cab and goes to Weatherfeild quays Montreal House at 21:56
leaves apartments at 23:43
arrives back in rovers at 1:43

Steve: I bet hes cheatin on mi mam, I've always thought he was that sort, useless, one of these days I'm gonna follow him to one of these meet-ups, anyway what kind of woman would like him hes an out of date Rocker with no real job, I suppose he could have slipped away
Blanche: have you checked the books at you cab office?
Steve: yeah it seems he keeps slipping away to different landmarks, even to Canal Street! hey mabye hes...
Blanche:he could be meeting up with that band of his Rock Dancing Monkeys is it?
Steve: something stupid like that, he could be doin he told mi mam he was going to gigs but I cant see him performing at the Trafford Centre or Mikes old apartments so its not very likely is it?
Blanche: thank you Steve, Norris is going to keep his eye on Vernon now
Last edited by Danny Parker : 17-03-2007 at 23:24

Amber: Innit dont forget to like keep your eye on Vernon he could be jus' like doin gigs an that but that int likely innit, Steveie boy reckons that he cheatin but it could be somethin a bit more sinister than that innit coz he could be like, ya know be covering somethin up like innit, mi dad reckons hes probably seeing one of them ladies of the night, well he like could be like well right coz Vernon is like minging so Blanche reckons Leanne might be like a lady of the night or somethin so shes gonna interview her to like ask if she know about Vernon, but i like weel dont think she'll admit it coz i wouldnt, Nozza is gonna be keepin' his eye like well out coz he reckons its the only way to catch him out.... like go get him and ya can like discuss stuff here if you want, like go get him

earlier today a dead body was found in the Weathefeild quays 'as yet we have no witnesses' Commented a police officer, it was a blonde woman who was last seen in the Trafford Centre, her name was Zoe Barton, police are now looking at CCTV for Montreal House which is only a few yards away from the death, police are not sure if the death was a suicide or a murder of just an accident, 'she was very drunk at the time of her death' police have not determined what the exact time of death was, 'if anyone saw anything at all dont hesitate to contact us'



Weatherfeild Police: 777 425

what do you think Vernons up to?

he is part of a cult

haha, hey who knows he could be

Liz: My Vernon came back in a terrible state that night
Blanche: well he was in Montreal House did he murder that lady?
Liz: no Vernon wouldnt hes harmless
Blanche: he keeps disappearing
Liz: Blanche I cannot listen to any more of this...
Blanche: tramp!

hahahaha, lol

Kind of copyed my Murder Mystery. Right?

Corrie Murder Mystery Month 1

Corrie Murder Mystery Month 2
Last edited by Kevnaldo : 18-03-2007 at 10:16

Does it matter if it's copied - they're both shite

I kinda copied it Kenvaldo

Vernon walks outside at 23:45
Zoe Barton follows
they look like they are arguing
walk out of view of camera

a women and a man with messy hair were walking towards the Quays, when a hooded man walked up to them and it looks like he threatend them with a knife, the woman was pushed into the water, and the man ran off...

owner: Zoe Barton lived in no.6a
Blanche: have you ever had a problem with her?
owner: no, well once she forgot to pay her rent
Blanche: do you know Vernon?
owner: who sorry?

so he was like mugged or somethin, so that is like well bad, but why was he in Zoes flat when she like well died coz he shouldnt have been there, I think he was having an affair, we are going to send David Platt to well, like break into her flat, and get some information..

Actually Kevnaldos are fantastic-so well thought out with excellent storylines, interviews and twists. Apolgoies to DP i havent read through this one as im too busy focusing on who killed Sonny-plus I hate Vernon!

David: wheres the light switch, found it, now lets have a look around, nothing in the drawers, lets go into the back room, its locked, oh well (smash)its not anymore, I'll switch on the light, its empty? theres no clue on why Vernon came here its totally un-occupied

Liz: I knew my Vern wasnt a killer, but why was he at that flat?
Blanche: do you think it might be possible he was having an affair?
Liz: Yes quite possible, I rerember when he tried it on with Michelle
Blanche: Really? dirty old man, do you think he might be involved in something darker?
Liz: I really hope not
Blanche: David Platt, has search Zoes old flat, there was nothing there at all, mabye he was just helping her move?
Liz: how would he know her?
Blanche: we dont know

yeah Kenvaldos are better, more thought out, but this may be Vernons downfall

Liam: I have never really met Vernon, but he looks one of them sort
Michelle: He came onto me when I started at the Rovers
Blanche: Liz told me
Liam: what? he came onto you, I'm gonna get him!
Blanche: we dont want any violence, do you know where Vernon keeps going Michelle?
Michelle: no, but lately he seems sad, ever since that night
Blanche: do you think he was having an affair?
Liam: he probably was the dirty...
Michelle: Liam! no I dont mabye Zoe was an old freind or Family member

I'm quite enjoying the one that kevenaldo is doing actually. Once you get into it, it is addictive!!

Dear Zoe
where should I meet you, we need to get some more money for the suprise
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RE-Dear Zoe
Vernon, I will meet you in the Trafford Centre about 8pm, how much will this cost?
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RE-Dear Zoe
Zoe we are no longer getting the suprise
Thank you
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RE-Dear Zoe
You always did change your mind, thats why you never told anyone about me!
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RE-Dear Zoe
Secrets are best kept Secret

Vernon was seen at Zoe Bartons funeral at 12:15
he stayed until 17:12
he got a taxi to the Red Rec
was spotted going into a house just off the Red Rec at 18:23
came out at 23:14
arrived in the Rovers at 00:11