hey guys iv posted clips of myself singing here before , but currently in the process of writing my own songs , i would an opinion no matter how brutal of what you think of my song , please give me some advice. do you think i have what it takes to me make it cheers mike

http://www.zshare.net/audio/702097216d32f3/

hety please give me some opinions guys i would really appreciate it

hey guys i could really do with some advice on my song , i would really appreciate any kinbd of criticism , good or bad thanks phil

You shouldn't really have this here. Try it on the music forum.

you sound hot and spicy