The DS Apprentice
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Task 3
Good Evening Ladies and Gentlemen, Sir 17,
we’d like to introduce you to Carly, a normal 8 year old girl, whose birthday is just around the corner. Her parents both work and Carly is sent to a childminder every day after school. The childminder can't arrange a birthday party, and Carly's parents don't have time, but luckily, help is at hand...
Carly's Mum was stuck for what to do, and called Smilie Smartie Parties, your local Children's Party Planner. SSP are affordable and arrange every detail through a simple questionnaire. Carly's Mum filled in one...
Gender: FEMALE
Age: 8
Favourite Colours: Pink, Purple, Silver,
Face Painting: YES
Food: YES
DJ or Bouncy Castle: DJ
Gender of children invited: All girls
Party Games: YES
Party Bags: Yes
Photography: YES
Would you like a themed party: NO
Any important information (allergies etc): NO
On the day of her birthday, Carly turned up to the school hall we had hired out specially, to see it kitted out in pinks and purples, as a truly magical event. Her friends were gobsmacked and amazed at how beautiful the place looked. At 4 o clock the party began, with DJ Rocko playing party hits like Girls Aloud, Sugababes and Take That. The children played games like Duck Duck Goose, Pass the Parcel, Pin the Tail on the Donkey, Musical Chairs, Musical Statues, A piñata. The main thing is that the children have fun!
We can also promise that your children will be completely safe. The only adults involved in the creation of your child's parties will be wearing bright orange t-shirts with Smilie Smartie Parties written on them.
We here at Strike, believe Smilie Smartie Parties has a Unique Selling Point; we offer photography! This means that while children are having fun, we will be taking photographs, and in three days time delivering the photos at your house! Your child's photos will never be distributed and will only be kept for a maximum of 3 weeks before deleting from the memory card.
If you buy the full package, including food, face painting and organised party games then we will throw in the photography completely free of charge! We also have a buy one get one half price offer...If you use us once, keep your receipt and use us again for half the price. Your receipt will be valid for 3 years from the date of your party and can be claimed at any point. These offers are running for limited time only and we are sure people will make good use of them.
And this all comes for only £100! We provide superb quality parties and our prices are great value for money. We can guarantee that every customer will be completely satisfied and will definitely be keen to use us again. Therefore we feel we would be a very worthwhile company for you to invest in.
If you have any questions please ask
Good Evening Ladies and Gentlemen, Sir 17,
we’d like to introduce you to Carly, a normal 8 year old girl, whose birthday is just around the corner. Her parents both work and Carly is sent to a childminder every day after school. The childminder can't arrange a birthday party, and Carly's parents don't have time, but luckily, help is at hand...
Carly's Mum was stuck for what to do, and called Smilie Smartie Parties, your local Children's Party Planner. SSP are affordable and arrange every detail through a simple questionnaire. Carly's Mum filled in one...
Gender: FEMALE
Age: 8
Favourite Colours: Pink, Purple, Silver,
Face Painting: YES
Food: YES
DJ or Bouncy Castle: DJ
Gender of children invited: All girls
Party Games: YES
Party Bags: Yes
Photography: YES
Would you like a themed party: NO
Any important information (allergies etc): NO
On the day of her birthday, Carly turned up to the school hall we had hired out specially, to see it kitted out in pinks and purples, as a truly magical event. Her friends were gobsmacked and amazed at how beautiful the place looked. At 4 o clock the party began, with DJ Rocko playing party hits like Girls Aloud, Sugababes and Take That. The children played games like Duck Duck Goose, Pass the Parcel, Pin the Tail on the Donkey, Musical Chairs, Musical Statues, A piñata. The main thing is that the children have fun!
We can also promise that your children will be completely safe. The only adults involved in the creation of your child's parties will be wearing bright orange t-shirts with Smilie Smartie Parties written on them.
We here at Strike, believe Smilie Smartie Parties has a Unique Selling Point; we offer photography! This means that while children are having fun, we will be taking photographs, and in three days time delivering the photos at your house! Your child's photos will never be distributed and will only be kept for a maximum of 3 weeks before deleting from the memory card.
If you buy the full package, including food, face painting and organised party games then we will throw in the photography completely free of charge! We also have a buy one get one half price offer...If you use us once, keep your receipt and use us again for half the price. Your receipt will be valid for 3 years from the date of your party and can be claimed at any point. These offers are running for limited time only and we are sure people will make good use of them.
And this all comes for only £100! We provide superb quality parties and our prices are great value for money. We can guarantee that every customer will be completely satisfied and will definitely be keen to use us again. Therefore we feel we would be a very worthwhile company for you to invest in.
If you have any questions please ask
Good afternoon to you
I today propose that you get involved with our business and that you support us for a wide range of reasons. Our business idea is a unique and we believe fantastic idea. Normally when people organise a party, they enjoy inviting people, buying food and drink and arranging it all. But what they don’t like doing- is cleaning their parties up and setting up their party beforehand and they certainly don’t like cleaning up after a party the next morning when it is in such a mess and their hair looks like Amy Winehouses’ with a hangover to match. Our proposal is a simple one, a before and after cleaning service for parties. Before the party, a cleaner will pop around clean whatever venue it may be and set the party up and help with preparation. After the party has ended, the next morning when the host has a thumping headache and severe hangover, do they really want to tidy their venue up? Of course not, they want someone else to do it, again when the cleaning team comes in and gets straight to work cleaning the venue in a short space of time and ensuring the venue is immaculately clean. This means for a small cost of just £10 an hour the host can have a relaxing and stress free day when they’re panicking and trying to organise every other aspect of the party and afterwards they can relax and catch up on their sleep and recover from their hangover when others are doing the cleaning for them, giving them one massively big chore less to consider. There would also be more benefits to using our service as well such as £5 off vouchers for customers who use the service more than twice, giving people a free trial the first time they use our service and the cleaning staff would also perform a range of tasks such as washing dishes/glasses, hovering, dusting, cleaning up spillages, cleaning bathrooms, the list is endless, almost all cleaning tasks there are our cleaning service would entail. We are a unique business for the reasons that we would attract customers as there are no other businesses quite like ours as no cleaning service would work late hours such as 2am to clean a location if the venue had to be cleaned by say 4 or 5am, no cleaning service would offer big discounts to loyal customers and no cleaning service would do a before and after service and help set up the party exactly the way the customers wanted it, these are all unique selling points to the customer and we believe no other cleaning company could quite match ours for all of our different points. We would have a team of enthusiastic, passionate and hard working cleaners, all striving and working hard to clean a certain location within a certain time limit. Any time, any where, any jobs, any type of party- our cleaning service would be around there with just 24 hours notice and doing the work required of them. What business can match this? What better present or sigh of relief for the host than this? This really is a state of the art business which rewards loyal customers, is quite cheap in cost, cleans up any mess from the night before at the venue of your party from anytime you wish- and if you don’t like the service you can write how it can be improved using the feedback sheets as well as this the entire first service is free and vouchers are dished out to those loyal customers of ours, who we are confident we would gain. Think about it, you know it makes sense- who wants to clean out a venue before or after when someone else can do it for them? Who would just love to pick up the phone, text on their mobile or email using the forms on the web a company who will do all the cleaning they desire for just £10 an hour, plus a free trial and discount vouchers? Everyone is the answer! You can enjoy your party, without having to worry about the cleaning and gives you a massive chore before and after the party less to think about and to do, all you have to worry about as a host is invites, booking venue and sorting out other things such as food, drink and disco etc. Please listen to us and please book up Mosiacs’ cleaning service- washing all your worries away.
I today propose that you get involved with our business and that you support us for a wide range of reasons. Our business idea is a unique and we believe fantastic idea. Normally when people organise a party, they enjoy inviting people, buying food and drink and arranging it all. But what they don’t like doing- is cleaning their parties up and setting up their party beforehand and they certainly don’t like cleaning up after a party the next morning when it is in such a mess and their hair looks like Amy Winehouses’ with a hangover to match. Our proposal is a simple one, a before and after cleaning service for parties. Before the party, a cleaner will pop around clean whatever venue it may be and set the party up and help with preparation. After the party has ended, the next morning when the host has a thumping headache and severe hangover, do they really want to tidy their venue up? Of course not, they want someone else to do it, again when the cleaning team comes in and gets straight to work cleaning the venue in a short space of time and ensuring the venue is immaculately clean. This means for a small cost of just £10 an hour the host can have a relaxing and stress free day when they’re panicking and trying to organise every other aspect of the party and afterwards they can relax and catch up on their sleep and recover from their hangover when others are doing the cleaning for them, giving them one massively big chore less to consider. There would also be more benefits to using our service as well such as £5 off vouchers for customers who use the service more than twice, giving people a free trial the first time they use our service and the cleaning staff would also perform a range of tasks such as washing dishes/glasses, hovering, dusting, cleaning up spillages, cleaning bathrooms, the list is endless, almost all cleaning tasks there are our cleaning service would entail. We are a unique business for the reasons that we would attract customers as there are no other businesses quite like ours as no cleaning service would work late hours such as 2am to clean a location if the venue had to be cleaned by say 4 or 5am, no cleaning service would offer big discounts to loyal customers and no cleaning service would do a before and after service and help set up the party exactly the way the customers wanted it, these are all unique selling points to the customer and we believe no other cleaning company could quite match ours for all of our different points. We would have a team of enthusiastic, passionate and hard working cleaners, all striving and working hard to clean a certain location within a certain time limit. Any time, any where, any jobs, any type of party- our cleaning service would be around there with just 24 hours notice and doing the work required of them. What business can match this? What better present or sigh of relief for the host than this? This really is a state of the art business which rewards loyal customers, is quite cheap in cost, cleans up any mess from the night before at the venue of your party from anytime you wish- and if you don’t like the service you can write how it can be improved using the feedback sheets as well as this the entire first service is free and vouchers are dished out to those loyal customers of ours, who we are confident we would gain. Think about it, you know it makes sense- who wants to clean out a venue before or after when someone else can do it for them? Who would just love to pick up the phone, text on their mobile or email using the forms on the web a company who will do all the cleaning they desire for just £10 an hour, plus a free trial and discount vouchers? Everyone is the answer! You can enjoy your party, without having to worry about the cleaning and gives you a massive chore before and after the party less to think about and to do, all you have to worry about as a host is invites, booking venue and sorting out other things such as food, drink and disco etc. Please listen to us and please book up Mosiacs’ cleaning service- washing all your worries away.
Well...you know 
But seriously, thanks team because I think OK Then and Clone Clown really pulled it out the bag and I was not there to support them...It has been enjoyable working with you and if we lose, it is mostly my fault!
*gulp*
But seriously, thanks team because I think OK Then and Clone Clown really pulled it out the bag and I was not there to support them...It has been enjoyable working with you and if we lose, it is mostly my fault!
*gulp*
Task One... Mosaic
Strike had some good stuff but Mosaic's felt more thorough and professional
Task Two...Mosaic
Strike, again your poster was good but Mosaic's was fantastic.
Task Three...Strike
Strike's was excellent, and was a lot more structured than Mosaic's. Also...it was more entertaining and that met the criteria well.
Mosaic win 2-1!
Strike had some good stuff but Mosaic's felt more thorough and professional
Task Two...Mosaic
Strike, again your poster was good but Mosaic's was fantastic.
Task Three...Strike
Strike's was excellent, and was a lot more structured than Mosaic's. Also...it was more entertaining and that met the criteria well.
Mosaic win 2-1!
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