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Hollyoaks fan? I need your comments....
Several months ago I had been given the chance to write an episode of hollyoaks in exchange for some work experience with a writer, but unfortunately i dont watch hollyoaks so several months ago when i started writing the draft script i only had a week to watch hollyoaks and find out about the characters.
She has now given me some feedback and told me to work on it a bit more. So basically im not scrapping my current storylines but im working with what ive written and trying to improve it.....he advice was to learn more about the character histories and find more light hearted scenarios...(apart from the jake kidnapping charlie theme which is the main storyline of my episode) any comments will be helpful my storylines in order of importance are (in the context of the show 2 months ago) : THE MAIN STORYLINE: 1) Jake decides to kidnapp charlie from the hospital (this is just after he has tried to rape nancy)...however at the same time 2) Justin has decided he wants to help nancy by giving his bone marrow...Amy is upset with Justin for not sharing his plans with her and just going ahead with it without discussing it… 3) Danny and Hannah are caught in bed together by Neville. Neville hates hannah for being with a black man and danny makes hannah decide who she wants to be with... 3) Louise and Calvin got drunk and slept together (calvin is meant to be going out with carmel at his point) and louise and warren are together but louise told calvin some secrets about warrens dodgy dealings and now warren suspects louise. Calvin wants louise to come to the police and give a statement about what she told him.... 1)Are these realistic storylines? 2)How can i make more light hearted, maybe humorous situations out of these storylines..... 3)is there any way i can link these three different storylines...i.e. maybe have a scene where jake sees louise/calvin/justin/warren/danny/hannah Anyone got any comments? |
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3) Danny and Hannah are caught in bed together by Neville. Neville hates hannah for being with a black man and danny makes hannah decide who she wants to be with...
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If you think in the context of the show several months ago, if neville caught danny and hannah in bed together, how woudl his character realistically react and how would danny react to hannah having a racist father?
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