I started a bit of fanficton on eronline was gonna get Jess, cat and kat to all add a paragraph or so. Here's what I got so far:
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“Disclaimer: As much as would love too we do not own Eton Road and we have made this all up so please don't sue us because we will have the mother of all tantrums (Think Nikki from BB x 1000). Oh and if you don't like the story keep it to yourself because we will all get writing complex's and become unable to write again for fear of being critised, thank you.
Darth Raydar and The Pirate Invasion - By Lucy, Jess, Cat and Kat
It was a blustery winters night and the streets of London were almost empty. Despite the incomming Christmas rush, a calm tranquility had settled and families were staying in to watch Christmas telly whilst curled up around their roaring fires. "Where is everybody?" inquired Ant shivering as he glanced around the deserted roads. Danny shrugged and James looked puzzled. "It is a little odd... it seems as if everyone's forgotten it's nearly Christmas", mused David as he wrapped another scarf tightly round Ant's neck. Ant sneezed and David looked at him concerned, "I said you should have stayed at home.. we don't want you to get ill again." Ant pouted, his rosy red cheeks glowing in the sunlight, "I'm fine it's just a cold". David reached into his bag and pulled out another scarf and placed it carefully on Ant. Danny let out a snort of laughter, "That's the tenth scarf you've put on him.. I think he's wrapped up enough now". David shot Danny an annoyed look and opened his mouth to retort. "Stop it you two... don't start..." yelled James stepping between them, "Let's just get our shopping done and get home... If we're quick we might be back in time for Desperate Housewives". He grabbed Ant by the arm and steered him into a large department store. Danny and David sulked after them towards the glittering shop window displays.
As the boys meandered around the toy section David leaned into a cart of toys and picked up a green alien with purple anteni and red spots, "Oh look it's Danny!!!". James sniggered and Danny looked furious. "Oh look it's David's better looking twin", he snarked waving a blue gorilla in the air. Ant was busy examining Disco Barbie, "I love her shoes.. do you reckon they come in my size???".
Suddenly the entire store was plunged into darkness. After a few moments of muffled screems and confusion the light was restored. Danny was lying crumpled on the floor having tripped over James in the blackout. "What on earth was that?", whispered David picking Danny up off the floor. "I dunno", moaned Danny brushing himself off. James looked nervously round, "Let's just get out of here.. come on Ant". He turned to grab Ant but the place where Ant had been stood was empty. "Where'd he go?", James said trying to keep the worried tone out of his voice. David and Danny started wandering through the empty ailse's calling out for him but he was nowhere to be found.
"What are we going to do? His mobile is switched off and nobody has seen him!!!", cried Danny looking panicked. David and James shared a concerned look. "Hang on whats that...", Danny said wandering over to a dark corner of the store. "Look it's Ant's scarf's..." David observed taking a closer look, "They seem to be spelling a word". James inhaled sharply and gave the other two a frightened look,"They spell Raydar!!!!"”
Last edited by crazypanda : 29-11-2006 at 11:53
Catch you tomorrow! 
I will have to see what happens with that then. Thanks for explaining things, Disnae. 
They're talking about thongs and their internet support! 
Chat later. 
